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Comments for 'Purgatory: Part 1' |
Frightener
7:28 pm | March 28, 2004
Very good story, I loved it. Great Storyline, ant its good to see something original for a change.
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Lord Spark
1:05 pm | March 23, 2004
Wow! I didn't expect this much praise. Thanks for the support. It deffinatly encourages me to make the next one even better.
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The Collector
3:11 am | March 23, 2004
Wow... Glad to see something quite good after a few of the bad ones this week. I can tell you'll be working doubly triply hard not to have any spelling errors and make this story even more gripping. Not bad boy/girl this is quite something you got here.
Good Luck with that
*Sniff* *Sniff* its good to see great ability displayed on here after a torent of horrid writers. *Sniff* *Sniff*
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SOS.Odin
10:30 pm | March 22, 2004
i use wordpad :D
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Snake Solid 117
6:51 pm | March 22, 2004
That was very cool. I liked it a whole hell of a lot. There where a lot of spelling errors, but the story was still very good none the less.
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Agent Shade
5:46 am | March 22, 2004
very impressive, interesting idea, but damn man, lots of grammar and spelling problems.
i like the way you told the story...it was very..."street" if you know what i mean. kinda reminds me of this Oswald dude writing a diary entry or something. i'm going to assume that you used word pad, cuzz there were too many mistakes to count. get someone to edit it or try and write it on Word
keep writing
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SOS.Odin
10:59 pm | March 21, 2004
id hafta say i liked it
just use the code and spell check
seems itll be an interesting series
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Helljumper
8:21 pm | March 21, 2004
Hmmm interesting
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Lord Spark
2:24 pm | March 21, 2004
I would just like to say that this is supposed to be a series. I don't now why it doesn't have it as a series on the list. I guess I'll repost it and make sure its put under a series lable this time. And fix some of the spelling errors as well.
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