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Comments for 'Search for Chief part two'



Taze
8:31 am | August 5, 2003
Treated
Taze
8:29 am | August 5, 2003
Alot of grammer problems but still pretty good.7/10 P.S. a grunt would never be trated like an elite.
scope
4:10 pm | August 4, 2003
6.5/10 The way the covies talked to ecother just seemed wrong.
Alpha Lance
4:35 am | August 4, 2003
Why don't you use seven cycle,nine units for
Covenant time,like in the novel "Halo The Flood."
And spacebar is use to indent,instead of writting
"indent," m'kay.

P.S. Not bad.
monitor101
10:37 pm | August 3, 2003
Okay their are a lot of grammer mistakes and You should make a new paragraph when ever someone new speaks. 7/10 pretty good!


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