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Comments for 'A last line of defense'

3:23 am | May 29, 2004
Wanna improve writing? Read Gene Wolfe's "Book of the New Sun" tetralogy. If you doubt me, go read the reviews. One of the best books ever written, not to mention a great Sci-Fi.
3:23 am | May 29, 2004
WTF, Hunters hands are too big for a plasma sword, they'll probly kill themselves trying to work one. Get you're info right and then write a story based on it
3:20 am | May 29, 2004
Read some self-help writing books, or go to www.sfwa.org and read up on writing techniques. But then, you simply don't get the information right. Seriously, how the hell do marines hold off superior numbers of Covenant? I mean, yeah, it's happened, but still, it's mpretty damn unlikely. And hunters... No shields, although plasma swords are a definite possibility. Actually no.
4:44 am | May 28, 2004
Don't listen to them! Keep writing and never stop doing what you love to do. Write something every day if you can. (I've set a goal to write 1000 words a day, six days a week). There are some great books out there that can help you to improve your writing. Check out your local bookstore or library.

"Most of the important things in the world have been accomplished by people who have kept on trying when there seemed to be no hope at all." ~ Dale Carnegie
1:05 am | May 28, 2004
Poor use of information, and characters. The use of a multiplayer map is also limited (Have you ever seen Red vs. Blue? "It's a box canyon, with no way in, and no way out!"). That doesn't exactly leave for much excitment, being in a box canyon and all.
Nick Kang
8:11 pm | May 27, 2004
He is.

white grunt
5:20 pm | May 27, 2004
isn't MC very quiet?
Nick Kang
10:32 am | May 27, 2004
Yuck. That's all I have to say. Yuck.

Hunters' shields don't 'go down' after a certain amount of hits, and Hunters don't have plasma swords. There is no way in Hell that 20 Marines could hold off 150 Covies.

H1 Pro
8:13 pm | May 26, 2004
The code,the code,the code. Use it.

3:03 pm | May 26, 2004
Boo, all types of information are wrong and this si crap.