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Comments for 'Pre-Op - The battle of Beta Tucanae'



Vegeta
3:52 pm | July 18, 2002
It's long and it's good. Keep writing.
Nike
1:21 am | July 16, 2002
Really, let's make peace and defeat the Flood and Covenant *insert evil laughter.*
Arch
10:06 pm | July 15, 2002
Jeez, enough with our mini flamewar here! I don't think ANYONE wants a flamewar in the Fanfiction section.
Nike
9:14 pm | July 15, 2002
Whatever.
Arch
10:37 pm | July 14, 2002
Yeah, so we spammed pretty much everything with our little feud. What's your point? You did likewise, so the 'glass Longsword' thing applies to you too.
Nike
10:14 pm | July 14, 2002
Plus, Wolf, you and Arch did it too.
Nike
10:12 pm | July 14, 2002
Fine. *Growls and walks away*.
Knightmare Wolf
5:22 pm | July 14, 2002
How do I know? I was (Rather we) were told first hand
Knightmare Wolf
5:20 pm | July 14, 2002
Hey dont start, some others hate it when you do that, others dont care, this one happens to dislike it. Stop.
Nike
2:54 pm | July 14, 2002
F*** you, Lamethrower89.
Flamethrower89
12:43 am | July 14, 2002
Boy Nike ya gotta get out more often. Sheesh.
Nike
12:34 am | July 14, 2002
Ohhhhh, I see now. Don't throw stones in a glass house because the house will crumble. Duh.
Nike
12:34 am | July 14, 2002
Nope, now that I get what ya mean.
Arch
12:25 am | July 14, 2002
It's basically the 'don't throw stones if you live in a glass house' thing in HALO terms. We're not THAT weird, are we?
Nike
6:14 pm | July 13, 2002
I get what yer sayin' Arch buta glass Longsword. Man you and Wolf are strange.
Archangels Blade
11:42 am | July 13, 2002
Yeah, i'm sorry. I probably shouldn't have posted in the first place, eh? Knightmare Wolf, you can't take all the responsiblility, so i'll take half. I won't post here again unless i have something to say. Thanks for putting up with mine and Knightmare's useless banter.
Knightmare Wolf
12:54 am | July 13, 2002
Remember how we were talking about grammatical (If thats a word) errors? Well he said dont fire a missile if you fly a glass longsword, read from there
Nike
12:18 am | July 13, 2002
Don't care, Arch, cuz I had no freaking clue what ya were talking about. Sounded like "Moonman" talk ta me.
vector40
9:12 am | July 12, 2002

Take it elsewhere, Halo 4256.
Halo 4256
7:08 am | July 12, 2002
astaroth..where did you get your name??
Knightmare Wolf
2:22 am | July 12, 2002
lol, it started over a comment in one of arch's story things, it was supposed to be humorous and complementing his work at the same itme but it came out the wrong way! Anyways, arch said something in one of my stories that was a joke or.. something, i'm not sure how, but anyways we joked about it in an e-mail thing, so i guess it just kind of found it's what here. :) lol, so if its pissed everyone off sorry about that, i'll take responsibility (Or however you spell it, not too good at 11:27) since it probably was my fault in the first place. Now... Back to writing! Mwuhahahaha..
Knightmare Wolf
2:20 am | July 12, 2002
i completely understand nike's comment, and i hear you premier you'll remember it, but i honestly have no clue what "Green" is supposed to be
Knight Premier
2:11 am | July 12, 2002
Yo guys, thanks for spamming the unspammable.I'll remember this the next time you ask for something from me Knightmare Wolf.Green?
Nike
1:12 am | July 12, 2002
Arch and Knightmare, I have no vlue what yer talkin' about but just shut the hell up, dammit.
Knightmare
12:56 am | July 12, 2002
you might wanna refresh your thing then
Knightmare Wolf
12:16 am | July 12, 2002
lol....
Archangels Blade
6:41 pm | July 11, 2002
I'll just shut the hell up until i can use my computer at home. This one keeps double posting, and hiding my previous posts.
Archangels Blade
6:38 pm | July 11, 2002
Oh fuck. My connection obviously isn't working. I thought the first comment didn't post. shit. whoops. oh shit.
Archangels Blade
6:38 pm | July 11, 2002
Oh fuck. My connection obviously isn't working. I thought the first comment didn't post. shit. whoops. oh shit.
Archangels Blade
6:14 pm | July 11, 2002
Let YOU win?! Not on your life! Besides, it's a hardpoint, not an attachment that the missile goes on! We may have a truce, but don't think that will really stop me for long!!
Archangels Blade
6:14 pm | July 11, 2002
Knightmare, you are such an idiot. It's called a 'hardpoint' for missiles. I'm still not gonna let you win. Even if it's a truce, im gonna find a way to humiliate your ass.
Archangels Blade
11:15 am | July 9, 2002
What attachment? I didn't know you needed attachments to find a good comeback.
Knightmare Wolf
12:27 am | July 9, 2002
Btw arch, you're still going to lose right? (By letting me win?) lol :)
Knightmare Wolf
12:18 am | July 9, 2002
Oh, #$%$ you. An attachment to fire the MISSILE so the weapon itself wasnt directly attatched to the glass longsword! IN THIS WAY THE GLASS DOESNT SUPERHEAT, MELT, BREAK OFF ETC.!
Knight Premier
12:00 am | July 9, 2002
To clear things up, again:I never intended to start a series, all I wanted to do was write a concept for the begining scene of Halo '2'. If I had been planning a sequel, I would have used a more...friendly name.Also, the series is not called 'Pre-Op' damnit. The second addition to the series is the events that happen directly before the Battle of Beta-Tucanae. Sorry if that wasn't clearly evident. Maybe I could get Louis to change the title names, but untill then, understand that everything I write goes under the same series.Oh, and I'd like to point out that the bad spelling is a result of late-night typing, and the lack of a checker in Notepad. Next time I will use Outlook Express to spell check my stories before I send them in.P.S. Vector40, I'm working on a submittion for Zenith. I keep my word.
ATM Machine103
11:54 am | July 8, 2002
Good and Wolfie is right about the Chief mistake.
AssMonkey
11:54 am | July 8, 2002
One thing I notice is that your series has no title. Your first part was called "...Must Carry You Out." This one's called "Pre-Op-The Battle of Beta Tucaene." Is the series called "Pre-Op?" A good...wait not good, awesome chapter!
AssMonkey
11:54 am | July 8, 2002
Freaking cool.
vector40
11:02 am | July 8, 2002

Astaroth... there's no book, but Kellen and I are working on one... : )
-v
Knightmare Wolf
12:09 am | July 8, 2002
Arch i've tried that, it worked, all i had to do was rig an attachment to it, unfortunately you came along and ruined it.
Archangels Blade
10:33 pm | July 7, 2002
Knightmare, you're just as bad as Premier about the grammar! Don't fire missles if you fly a glass Longsword! You'll end up eating vacuum before the day is out! Nice story, and if the title IS Pre-op, it's gonna need a whole new series for the battle. It's great. Keep it coming.
Knightmare Wolf
3:03 pm | July 7, 2002
Ack, Chief!
Knightmare Wolf
3:02 pm | July 7, 2002
You did indeed spell Shief wrong once or twice, also in the "Shadow Man" part you forgot a question mark to go into some specifics
Knightmare Wolf
2:54 pm | July 7, 2002
In your forst part... .Its REWIND not FAST FORWARD, if it was then the spartans died. Thought i'd point that out, if i'm wrong tell me
Knight Premier
11:24 am | July 7, 2002
Argghh! It's Chief not Cheif....what the hell is wrong with me!
Knight Premier
11:24 am | July 7, 2002
Argghh! It's Chief not Cheif....what the hell is wrong with me!
Astaroth
8:42 am | July 7, 2002
Where does every-one get the names for their, ships, stoires and characters? Is it a book or something? "1001 names for halo fanfic and starships" (accompanying dvd available) or does every-one but me have an amazing imagination, by the by, nice work Mr Premier, i'm expecting more of the same, or, well, accidents can happen....
killa_snypa7
4:08 am | July 7, 2002
double posting, thats what :)
killa_snypa7
6:27 pm | July 6, 2002
Me :)
Knightmare Wolf
3:30 pm | July 6, 2002
Aha! I too have found errors! Right at the start even, who woulda guessed?
TrueNike
10:32 am | July 6, 2002
wHOOPs
TrueNike
10:19 am | July 6, 2002
Freaking detailed. This series is suh-weet.
TrueNike
10:19 am | July 6, 2002
In killa_snypa7" words: Wow.
killa_snypa7
6:59 am | July 6, 2002
in a word... Wow!
saturn
3:57 am | July 6, 2002
It's great. Like knightmare wolf says. I won't have to bring a fleet from saturn either.
Knight Premier
3:48 am | July 6, 2002
Thanks Vec, I saw a couple other errors along the way too, and the conjunctive clauses have been a repeated screwup.And yes, the next part is the good stuff. This 'chapter' is just there to set up the events to come, and man do they need it. Lets just say that the next part will be funner for those who decided to buy the soundtrack...I hope you can read fast.
vector40
3:39 am | July 6, 2002

Excellent work :)

Really well done. Good set up - now I'm waiting for the rest ;)

One pointer - when "its" is used as a possesive, it doesn't use an apostrophe.

i.e. He picked up the gun. Its barrel was long.
When you're using it as a contraction (shortened from "it is"), it takes an apostrophe, but not the possessive.

Anyway, just a pointer. Nice story :)

-v

Living_Sacrifice86
3:39 am | July 6, 2002
It's a great start sounds like the next chapters gonna be good keep it going!!!
Knight Premier
3:34 am | July 6, 2002
Just to cover a descrepancy between my two works.In '...must carry you out' I stated that the battle of Reach took place only a few days prior to the Cheif's return.In 'Pre-Op' however, I stated that it had been nearly a month since the Cheif left Reach.I thought about it for a while and decided that a) The UNSC could not retro fit it's fleet in a matter of days. b) A new suit and weapons could not be designed in a matter of days, and c) the time accumulated by the Trans-light subspace drive plus the Cheif's time on Halo must be at least 20 days total, given the way cryo sleep is used to conserve energy and supplies.And thanks for the compliments.
Knightmare Wolf
3:09 am | July 6, 2002
Wow, I'm amazed... Keep the rest like this, and I won't have to come over with my oversized death dealing covenant cruiser of death and nuke you


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