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Comments for 'Fafnir Part Seven - A cryptic Message'



Knightmare(MM
10:34 pm | November 3, 2002
Arch I just picked something up... I don't think you helped create some of the Revancers.... Care to point any fingers in our next MSN conv?
Arch
9:29 pm | November 2, 2002
hey, don't worry, man! i haven't been bitching, and i'm merely waiting for Knightmare to hurry up and get on with the story so i can see what ELSE i can do. Man, kool it, we'll pull through. i may sound lazy at the moment, but that's because i'm half asleep from lack of rest, what with all i've been doing lately. I've been on, and that's what counts, right? BTW, Knightmare, i was referring to the rifles from Rebirth (oops, said it...), and several other things that you've been planning to use, such as some of the Revancers. It's all good, though, because as soon as i know where FAFNIR is leading, i can finish pulling all of my stuff together. kool it.
Shadow
4:03 pm | November 2, 2002
Arch, and Knight...both of you cool out. Or I'll tear you both apart. But I'm more or less peeved at Arch. Arch, please tell us that you've done SOMETHING significant to further our little project, even if you have nothing to show for it. Or something. You're never on...which makes it even worse, and then you go bitch at Knightmare for doing no work. Knightmare works with me a LOT on the rebirth project. I can't say the same for you Arch. C'mon, lets get it together. This project is no tlonger involving you. Get online and help out, or at least email us some stuff that you've thought up of or have been working on.
Knightmare(MM
3:56 pm | November 2, 2002
And will someone please tell me what rounds were coated in plasma shells in this story? Maybe it is confusing...
Knightmare(MM
3:54 pm | November 2, 2002
Alright Arch, I'm going to sound like an ass but:

What I created... Yes I'm... Going to state it somewhere.... But not here.... Includes... Many, MANY things... That WILL NOT BE STATED HERE and IF YOU ARE EVER ON WHEN I AM I WILL TELL YOU WHAT I HAVE CREATED THAT IS USED IN AD LIB!!!

lol... That felt good.

Arch
1:25 pm | November 1, 2002
YOUR creation? since when? at any rate, we all contributed, as the rounds for the weapons were, as you stated yourself, coated in a plasma shell. After all, that follows the designs for my phase rifle. Still, good story. I didn't get to tell the half of it. It was slightly confusing, as you like to use the figurative language that makes the thing look like a scripture passage. And besides that, there's the fact that with all the jumping around you did, it made it hard to understand who was where. It was still good from what i could understand(which was most of it, mind you), but i think it would be better if you explained things more fully in your next chapter.
Knightmare(MM
4:57 am | November 1, 2002
*Chuckle* YOUR? I don't think so... Most of the stuff I've used is more or less my creation.
Sarge
1:59 am | November 1, 2002
THat's the story that KNightmare keeps bothering me about. And he tends to use your weapons and charachters in our add-libs.
Arch
1:25 pm | October 31, 2002
Lynnada, good to hear from you. but no, i'm not joining you in the ranks of the unattending. i'm staying right here, on HBO, in the fanfiction section. I like it here. Anyways, nice work, Knightmare. In the little time i could find to read last night, i did, and i enjoyed. It's always good to see that you're one step closer to Rebir- *shuts up* nvm, you didn't hear that from me. Lynnada, you speak, you die.
Knightmare(MM
12:06 pm | October 31, 2002
Don't worry sat, Arch is alive.
saturn
11:57 pm | October 30, 2002
another oldie accounted for. looks like arch is gone for good. i WILL return. not bad at all/ i like ure little intros with the ships name and blah blahg, its like a captains log.
Knightmare(MM
11:42 pm | October 30, 2002
My word, Wado if you're calling that action... I don't know...
Wado
11:21 pm | October 30, 2002
Nice job.

Lots of action, very intense, not unlike a battle in a sinking ship.

Knightmare(MM
9:29 pm | October 30, 2002
"Ugh1?" I could've sworn that was an exclamation mark...


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