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Comments for 'Rebirth - Shadow's Chapter 3 - Entrance'



Knightmare(MM
6:48 pm | June 2, 2003
A good start... yar.
scope
1:44 pm | June 2, 2003
9.5/10 This is a good start and I am goona follow this seris
Ender Trick
10:39 pm | June 1, 2003
Thats funny... It says i posted both comments at the same time, WEIRD
Ender Trick
10:26 pm | June 1, 2003
Its very good. Two things though: First EVA sounds to much like morpheus and matrix shit Two is that althoughI like the way the stories going I will always love the MC... If you could fit him in some way... Great job
Ender Trick
10:26 pm | June 1, 2003
Thank you lol havent read the story yet but the first sentence... I LUV U
I really enjoyed chapter 2 by the way peace talk to ya later
Wiley Kimball
10:19 pm | June 1, 2003
Great, 9/10


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