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Comments for 'Situation on Triton 8 Part 1' |
Kirsten Moerman
9:32 pm | July 16, 2004
K,thx but this is my first story so.....
Oh and,im not a girl!!!!this is getting very annoying.Thx for the tip!
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MC's Cousin
1:12 am | July 15, 2004
You know, I'm not big on dissin' females but...whoa! Holy burnin' poo on a stick!
Too dramatic. Let me be more specific. Like russ687 said (as well as Jess, and yes, I would say it's a word, but Webster might not) you need to use the code. But more pertinent, please, separate your sentenses. Please!!!!!! I took one look at that and got a headache, I tried to read the first paragraph, and had to chug a mocha to relieve my new migrain. By the way, mochas ROCK! Anyway, use two spaces from the ending punctuation to the next word/sentense.
Insted of: Hi,my name is bob.How are you?Do you have any extra pants?Where are my almonds.Oh yeah,I'm Jim, but no I don't have any extra pants.But I found these nuts.
Make it look like this (I'm including the code):
[indent] "Hi, my name is Bob," the man said. "How are you? Do you have any extra pants? Where are my almonds?"
[indent] "Oh yeah, I'm Jim," the other man replied. "But no I don't have nay extra pants. But I found these nuts."
See what a difference it makes?
Signing Off
MCC
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The Collector
8:00 pm | July 14, 2004
Ouch
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Noobasaurus Rex
9:29 am | July 14, 2004
Btw, i think ima gonna change my name to Noobasaurus Rex Now..
Rex
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Jessica
9:27 am | July 14, 2004
Lmao...Dun be mean...i'm sure she'll remember to use the code in her next story...
Noobasaurus Rex - Jess
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Master Sergenat
3:54 am | July 14, 2004
Jesus lady. three words. USE THE CODE! damn lady
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Jessica
12:12 am | July 14, 2004
Yes...the code will do you good...LoL, and yea, use the code, it'll greatly improve the readibility of your story...btw, is readibility a word?
Jess
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russ687
9:03 pm | July 13, 2004
Read the guidelines and rules and find out how to use the code.
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