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Comments for 'Prologue'



Keyes
5:31 am | May 1, 2004
I know it sounds familiar, because what happened in that structure is a broad topic. I promise that in chapter two and up, it will sound diffrent. As for Paragraphs, I KNOW I NEED THEM!!!!!!!!!!
MC's Cousin
11:06 am | April 26, 2004
Well, there, I read it. Happy?

You know, that sound awfully familiar...

Signing Off


MCC
Keyes
6:05 pm | April 23, 2004
Ya, I know it's long. As will Chapter one's, which is already submitted. Two-whatever will have better editing
Hikaru-119
11:58 am | April 23, 2004
That is a really big paragraph.
BlackGhost
1:57 am | April 23, 2004
Pretty good, that's a huge-ass paragraph though.
weirdalfan989
5:49 pm | April 22, 2004
I thought it was interesting. It gives a new spin to it. But it does sound familier
Keyes
5:31 pm | April 22, 2004
No, I don't think it has. If anyone knows for sure, let me know. But I can assure you, if there is one, this story is an original.
Keyes
5:31 pm | April 22, 2004
Has it? I don't think so, but if you find out, let me know.
Helljumper
5:17 pm | April 22, 2004
YOu need to use the code, the story has been done i think, i could be wrong.

ODST


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