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Comments for 'A Letter Home'

Elite Zov
8:02 pm | June 1, 2004
Nice job, interesting fact that Elites actually have somethin' human. Hmm..
4:51 pm | May 28, 2004
Wow, this story was very awesome. The perspective and character developement was awesome. You didn't use any human words and remained true to the milieu (the word minutes, bullets, and Elites never showed up).

This story was very well-written. I'd like to thank you for the read.

Keep it up,
Kellen Squire
8:11 pm | May 27, 2004
Thank you for your encouragement.
10:33 pm | May 26, 2004
yes it is really good.

Cobalt Shiva
9:41 pm | May 26, 2004
Excellent story! It's nice to get a perspective from the 'other side' once in a while, and to see that the Covenant aren't the religious fanatics they're made out to be. Given how things often work in history, I would guess that your portrayal of the Elites is much more reasonable than the 'single-minded fanatic' view that seems so popular now.

Excellent character development, and fabulous writing. Of course, there's a downside - I might not have the heart to carry things through next time my pistol's lined up on an Elite skull...

4:33 pm | May 26, 2004
Wow- this is good. Although I always thought that the Covenant wouldn't use paper...
The pseudocode. Use it. They should start putting it in BIG BOLD PRINT, AND MAKE SURE YOU READ IT WHEN YOU FIRST SUBMIT YOUR STORY.
All in all, good except for the beforementioned lack of coding.