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Comments for 'War for Earth City [3]: Not Much of a Friend'



Phalanx3580
7:28 pm | August 28, 2003
well i like it except for the fact he kills his best friend i dont think that would be very realistic..... but still i give it a 9/10
Kancer
10:28 pm | August 13, 2003
Thanks, it's nice to know everyone likes it.Dont forget to read the second before you read this one
JCDenton
9:29 pm | August 13, 2003
Nice job. to be a little more critic, I give you... a...9.5. there. that is very criticistic, right?

Nah kiddding. 9.5. good job. but I suggest, it allways can be better ;) keep it up.
GLADIATRRR3000
7:12 pm | August 13, 2003
thats a good thing, by the way
GLADIATRRR3000
7:08 pm | August 13, 2003
way to go. now i have to read the next one
Kancer
5:15 pm | August 13, 2003
Thanks Pooman
pooman
4:44 pm | August 13, 2003
good 10/10


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