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Comments for 'Four Plagues [2]: A New Enemy'



Hawk7886
11:31 am | August 11, 2003
Use the arrow keys "shift [,] and [.]" type the command [indent is arrow "i" arrow] the closing tag is [arrow "/i" arrow] the slash comes before the closing command. Hope that makes sense/helps/is correct :)
Kancer
3:38 pm | August 10, 2003
so [b]jshfsjfjs[b/]
Khyber
11:15 am | August 10, 2003
[indent] is indent, [i] opens italics and [/i] closes them for bold replace the previous with "b" instead of "i"
Kancer
9:18 pm | August 9, 2003
No, whenever i like add it, and click ok, and it lets you check it before it adds it, it never indents, do you have to do something like you have to do for bold letters? like (b)hfsdjhfsak(b/)
Alpha Lance
7:06 pm | August 9, 2003
Your kidin me,its "spacebar."
Kancer
5:22 pm | August 9, 2003
How do you indent, i forgot! And if you don't like this series, I hope you enjoy my new one, should be coming out any time!
Kancer
5:22 pm | August 9, 2003
How do you indent, i forgot! And if you don't like this series, I hope you enjoy my new one, should be coming out any time!
Kancer
5:22 pm | August 9, 2003
How do you indent, i forgot! And if you don't like this series, I hope you enjoy my new one, should be coming out any time!
Alpha Lance
3:57 pm | August 9, 2003
Man that was nice,9.0/10,and I did read it.
Lord Revan
3:07 pm | August 9, 2003
No offense, but like Spartan said... It's way too fast.

It's really hard for me to understand your story. And it really doesn't deliver the kind of atmosphere these stories should.

"Sir the Octouis(sp?) blew up!"

I don't know, that just doesn't seem... Fitting. It should be something like:

"Sir! The Octouis... She's..."

"Out with it son!!!"

"She's... She's gone..."
Spartan 117
1:51 am | August 9, 2003
you're jumping into this way to fast, not developing the charactors or making really clear their surroundings and actions. just slow down, and it should make your stories a lot better and more enjoyable.
Kancer
7:46 pm | August 8, 2003
So basically noone read my story, and gave a comment!
scope
1:57 am | August 8, 2003
9/10 Huh? Viris blowing up a ship is new.
pooman
1:06 am | August 8, 2003
i liked people will comment give them time 10/10
Kancer
12:43 am | August 8, 2003
Did anyone read this story???It can't be that badd!!!
Kancer
10:01 pm | August 7, 2003
Hey, this is the second installment for the Four Plagues, hope you like it! Sorry if i forgot to indent!!!


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