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Comments for 'Halo Beyond: Part 1'

7:15 pm | April 20, 2002
nice but i have to agree with them sorry. Keep writing
Joshua "Infernal" Barreto
12:12 am | April 20, 2002
good stuff, kid. Only thing is that the chief is a combatant, and doesn't need an AI, he's smart on his own.
4:28 pm | April 19, 2002
good work but i dont think that the cheif would relie on an A.I. to tell him how to kill a hunter-- work on your narration skills a bit too but i still think its good cant wait for more.