Comments for 'The Blood Gulch Gig (Part 1)'
4:10 am | April 2, 2004
Master CD said, "I can't wait for NUMBER 2!"
And in my most recent story MC had to constantly wait for too much NUMBER 2.
Strange mirror image. =D
7:24 pm | April 1, 2004
(enters to gasps and poorly concealed laughter)
I know, I haven't been around in a couple of months, (college is a lot tougher this semester), but I had to check up on the HBO fanfics and see if I still recognized any names.
Nice story, Jillybean. I don't know if I would classify it as a comedy, per se, but more of a well-written tale with a healthy dose of humour. I was concerned about how you would portray the males in the story, but after reading the line, "She's not my girlfriend, ass." I knew you had it locked down. As always, keep up the good work.
9:00 am | April 1, 2004
Heh heh heh... certainly got me interested! And great stuff! We need a bit of humour amongst all the grim stories out here! V funny, can't wait till No. 2!
1:15 am | April 1, 2004
Wow, this be sounding like a rockin' series. Keep it up, Jillybean!
10/10 This is a great intro to a series.
12:52 pm | March 31, 2004
hilarious buddy hilarious
11:08 am | March 31, 2004
Weeeeeeeeeeee! Great start, Jilly!
Wado, you ARE missed.
10:37 am | March 31, 2004
Highly entertaining. I can't wait to read where this goes.
10:05 am | March 31, 2004
Have to say this is one of the funniest comedies ive read on this site....and ive been her for a while....
Wado...he comes back for a few comments...then dissapears again....so like him.
keep it up
7:59 am | March 31, 2004
3:03 am | March 31, 2004
A mighty fine piece of creative writing. Love it.
7:53 pm | March 30, 2004
Haha! That was great, I can't wait 'till episode 2!
7:19 pm | March 30, 2004
Wado was here!
Nice going Jilly, make me come to Fan Fiction will ya.
Now I remember how much I miss the people here.
Well I'm off. Take care everyone.
5:47 pm | March 30, 2004
"Take not from the mouth of labor the bread it has earned."
5:45 pm | March 30, 2004
Yeah, you're lucky for Wu to mention you're story. This was a good story, But i'm a tough critic, so you get a 9.3/10 on this one. Good job! Hope to see more from you. :)
4:10 pm | March 30, 2004
hehe, i agree w/ cold... very awesome.
maybe check out of of my stories sometime, hey? yours was quite amusing, cant wait till part 2. must comidies usually suck... not this one. looks good so far.
3:39 pm | March 30, 2004
Good, I liked it, it seems you have a knack for humor, and everyone has their own kind. :)
Glad this is a series, too, and you got a front-page mention from Wu! I wish that happened to me, lol.
But anyways, good, kept me entertained and reading.
But you think you know men, eh? Heh heh heh--ow! :P