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Comments for 'Band of Brother: Bootcamp'



A Fan
4:28 am | June 26, 2004
CoLd BlooDed what is the ''code'' O.O ?
A Fan
4:24 am | June 26, 2004
Nick Kang said ''the that part where the soldiers tells the guys that Reach got hit, that's from Starship Troopers.'' I thought it sounded fimilier^_____^ ,but never the less update *___*
Nick Kang
11:31 am | June 16, 2004
I've had thoughts like that before: 'Hey, let's put in something from a movie. I doubt anyone here has ever seen it.'

Well that's a bad habit, and once you get into College(if you aren't already), you're probably gonna get kicked out for plagurizing(sp?).

NK
CoLd BlooDed
3:25 am | June 11, 2004
Oh, and Jet, I like how in every one of your stories I see something picked up from another movie or game, that's definately not your idea.

Not a good sign, man, if you're forced to steal other ideas from other things that means you're not putting enough effort into your writing.
CoLd BlooDed
2:35 am | June 11, 2004
No and no.
Tman
1:06 am | June 11, 2004
is anyone there
Tman
1:06 am | June 11, 2004
is anyone there
Nick Kang
8:47 pm | June 10, 2004
Oh, and that part where the soldiers tells the guys that Reach got hit, that's from Starship Troopers.

NK
Nick Kang
8:42 pm | June 10, 2004
This summer I'm hoping to finish up Operation: Stingray and move on to another series I've been writing.

NK
The Silver Spartan
9:59 pm | June 9, 2004
You tell 'em cold! lol
And WTF is w/ all of these noobs lately?

PS: Another of my stories will be posted soon... School just got out :) So I will have PLENTY of more time 4 stories this summer!!! C u all soon!

-The Silver Spartan-
CoLd BlooDed
9:16 pm | June 6, 2004
Jetboogieman, I refuse to read any of your stories that don't use the code. I've nagged enough, yet you still don't listen.

This still sucked, sure, I'm being cruel, but after telling you again and again, I just don't think your stories are any good. Nor will they GET any good.

But seriously, who knows? Maybe you'll proove me wrong.

Jet, I'll finish off this comment by saying that you should ACTUALLY listen to people who review your stories. Get better.
cvcsdvxcv
8:54 pm | June 4, 2004
SUCKED!!!!!! heh.....
Snowy Duck
7:35 pm | June 4, 2004
when you described wilks, i could see that you tried to add some figurative language. now by saming flaming hair....thats not very good, but using a symbol or possably an allusion would be a better start. just read a few published books and use their style.

just trying to improve your writing
Jetboogieman
6:39 pm | June 4, 2004
"And why would a pro pilot with that much combat flight experience be in bootcamp with some infantry?"

That will be explained later
Ghost
6:34 pm | June 4, 2004
Try like one instead of 1 and like not and a sentence like sometimes for special training wed be airlifted to the sahara for desert training just sounds kinda funny. And why would a pro pilot with that much combat flight experience be in bootcamp with some infantry?
Jetboogieman
6:11 pm | June 4, 2004
Read the book well slightly. And Ive watched the movies a million times
white grunt
5:24 pm | June 4, 2004
its good i like one question did you wacth band of brother?
Jetboogieman
12:45 pm | June 4, 2004
Well in some ways its exactly the same. But really i wasnt thinking when I wrote that bit
Nick Kang
10:17 am | June 4, 2004
Ummmm...I read up to the part where Wilks yelled at the guy about a rusty rifle and realized that this is almost exactly the same as the series 'Band of Brothers.'

NK


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