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Comments for 'The Battle for Earth (Chapters One and Two)' |
meyer
4:50 am | May 29, 2004
yeah, first time i read something from u, so i don't know what the rest of the guyz r talkin bout. But i thought it was all right. Very well detailed, i like that. But, probably since i didn't read the other stories, i didn't like the memory loss thing where he killed his own brothers. But i'm sure if i read your other ones that lead up to it or somethin, i'll like it. It seems to have a lot of potential if the reader has a background.
I never did get wat happened to Cortana.
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Jeremy
10:12 pm | May 28, 2004
Just to let you guys know, I should be finished with chapter three over the next couple of days, and I will submit it when I'm done.
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Nick Kang
11:33 am | May 26, 2004
Yeah, MCC is right. It is better than your last one, and I think it deserves a B-.
NK
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Frost Bite
12:32 pm | May 24, 2004
Must have sucked to be those other spartans. Memory lose and all, then seeing a spartan JUST after waking up... scary
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MC's Cousin
6:27 pm | May 23, 2004
Better. This one was an improvement (now that I can actually read the FF page). But, I have catching up to do.
Signing Off
MCC
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