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Comments for 'Order of the Seraphim Chapter 2'



max3949
9:15 pm | March 29, 2002
holy crap, is this long. any other writers [velker,shadow,etc]need to make there stories this long.
vector40
3:00 am | March 16, 2002

Watch the sentence structure.

Damn things are tricksy :)

Jehkoh
6:31 pm | March 15, 2002
This one is slower than the last. Yet it also set-ups for several future events to come, so, everything needs a precursor, this is it. I think I was redundant in my descriptions as well. Tell me some areas to improve in, because I know I made alot of silly mistakes.
VIP
1:11 pm | March 15, 2002
I have to say the 1st one was beter
Shadow
3:38 am | March 15, 2002
NICE!-shadow


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