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Comments for 'Halo: The MCconto Chronicles 6: The Phrophecy'



JCDenton
6:45 pm | August 14, 2003
No, it was just a bad call, that I wrote phrophecy in place of prophecy... my bad... I will keep serious and have no intent to kill my story.
Jinkaiden-XI
12:45 am | August 14, 2003
Still needs work, but another huge improvement. I noticed that you did spell 'prophecy' wrong, unless you meant to do so. I meantion this because it can tend to kill a story when the title of the chapter is spelled wrong.

No offense, it's coming along great.

Jinkaiden-XI
Alpha Lance
7:05 pm | August 13, 2003
Love it,10/10.
JCDenton
6:45 pm | August 13, 2003
So how did you like it?


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