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Comments for 'The Hell Of War Through The Eyes Of A Marine :Part 6'



marine 124
8:20 pm | June 2, 2002
5:37 pm/June 2nd,2002 Your stories are awesome! You have excellent detail, and please dont say my post is dumb [ even though it is ]... Im only ten. But I have noticed an error on chapt6, you said something about 3 Hunters entering the base, Hunters only travel in pairs, but other than that that, its good.
Hunter
12:48 pm | May 4, 2002
I like the story. Hey, why is everyone complaining about the grammar? The only fault I can find is that you write conveant instead of covenant.
Robo42786
1:39 am | April 18, 2002
yes i noticed the last 2 posts were the same, i dunno how it happened, oh well :\\
Robo42786
1:28 am | April 18, 2002
Jay and I have something special in mind, not in our next chapters, but in the followig ones, his chapter 8 my 5th chapter
Robo42786
1:28 am | April 18, 2002
Jay and I have something special in mind, not in our next chapters, but in the followig ones, his chapter 8 my 5th chapter
Jaywhit10
10:15 pm | April 17, 2002
this is great this is the most positve comments ive gotten in a long while. Actully some of the best since the beggining of my series. Thanks for reading them.
Swordsman
4:12 pm | April 17, 2002
I can see major improvements in punctuation and such from your earlier stories. Nice Job!
Alex Cross
11:40 am | April 17, 2002
God combat realism and attention to detail. I like, I like.
Jaywhit10
10:42 pm | April 16, 2002
Naaa yours are good but im leading up to something i might tell later if the other person lets me. Oops i said to much. I had some mistakes in there, but hey i tried something new.
Shadow
5:51 pm | April 16, 2002
That was good! Better than all my stories!\\


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