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Comments for 'The Hell Of War Through The Eyes Of A Marine :Part 4'



z0mbi
11:09 am | April 11, 2002
Uhh...sure thing man. However, one thing you may not realize is that in the medium you're using to express your art, grammar is everything.
Jaywhit10
9:09 pm | April 8, 2002
Ok thats fine i take critism thats fine but if people start bothering me about my stupid grammer ill kill them. 1. i write these really fast cause i have no time 2. i write it in the mail so i cant have the spell check
z0mbi
6:25 pm | April 8, 2002
Bad grammar. Full of amatuer writing mis-haps. Interesting action. Keep trying, and pay more attention in English class.
max3949
9:34 pm | April 7, 2002
i answered for ya. does my comment count as 3? you could do some proofreading and don't use the f word. it's kinda offending, to me.
Jaywhit10
3:18 pm | April 6, 2002
Come on no one really posts anything. I need more then 2 people so i can tell how people like it
max3949
9:50 am | April 5, 2002
great.


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