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Uncle Tone the Freakin Creakin Teachin Adensum
6:38 am | September 1, 2002
Jamie - Wow ! Now I know who writes this Sci-Fi rubbish.You have found your chosen profession. All those years of listening to your waffle wondering where it might lead - Well now I know. My boy, you are literally full of it.I cannot begin to comprehend what lies in the murky depths of your mind, but it worries me. Where do all these ideas come from? What have you been doing in your room?!! I shall ask Dad to take that pc out of there!! Honestly Jamie, this is very impressive ; I have read as far as Part 5, which is as much as I could take in, given the fact that I was up drinking with your dad, and therefore nursing a hangover. One question - When you began this epic, did you sketch an outline as to how you wanted to develop it, or did you let the juices flow onto the page, and see where it took you? Finally, this is a most enjoyable story, and it is work that you should feel justifiably proud of. See you soon Fitchit!! Uncle Tony
The Author
11:40 am | August 16, 2002
AAAAArrgghh could someone send me concept art or ideas for what the Andensum could look like in my story
The Author
11:35 am | August 16, 2002
For some reason when I sent my story the bit at the beginning about it being unfinshed was chopped off. I just wanted to say that I am adding more to the story but I thought by adding it here people would give me ideas of how to carry it on. Thanks to Jason and Arch (whoever u are) for complimenting me.I'd like to hear you guys suggestions on what I could do next. Also I wanted to say that the story that I am posting on here is actually going to become my fiction piece for my English GCSE so help will be apreciated greatly. I'd like to contact Arch becuase he seems to be an isightful person. I'm only 15 and I don't find it easy to write stories that little bit took me 4 and more hours and thats less than two pages. CONTACT ME I NEED HELP
Knightmare
1:33 am | August 10, 2002
creative name...
Arch
12:23 pm | August 7, 2002
it seems unfinished. You gonna make a sequel? However, what you have right now seems pretty freakin' good. Keep it up, man!
Jason
2:24 am | August 4, 2002
WOW... best short i've heard in a long time...


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