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Comments for 'Through Your Enemies Eyes, part 1'



dbud599
3:53 pm | December 8, 2003
Halo is cool!
Rommel M.
12:58 pm | December 17, 2002
Good start, although I have one complaint...ceasar is spelled caesar. I know I sound like an English teacher...But, all in all a good story so far. I hope to see more of Darius and the gang soon! :P
Jahan
1:09 am | December 16, 2002
Thanks for the compliments, I guess your right about the explantion of the Elites. I'll try to right at least 4 or 5 more parts if that satisfys your Halo needs:P
el_halo_diablo
9:58 pm | December 12, 2002
um, I think the whole explantion about what an elite looks like was unneccesary, I'm pretty sure we all know what an elite looks like(I doubt many poeple who write/read fan fics here haven't at least seen a picture of one). Lots of metaphors, I like that. Um...yah I hope you stay here, we need some permanents.
Disciple75
8:19 pm | December 12, 2002
Hey, great story! Interesting thought on the name of the Elites. I would have thought the Spartans would have been renamed after augmentation to have those type names. Good job, keep it up!! Disciple75


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