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Comments for 'A John Before Halo: Part 5'



J-117
4:21 pm | August 11, 2003
part 6 is out now, tell me wat u think of it.
J-117
2:15 pm | July 31, 2003
because Blizzard wants to take pride into thinking that they made something oringinal, when they didn't, and the 20% is to make me shut up and never tell this to other people. I broke the contract even though they dont know it, and I dont care really.
riot
12:21 pm | July 31, 2003
if blizzard won't admit that they stole your story, then why would they give you 20% of the proceeds?
J-117
2:24 am | July 31, 2003
and yes it did involve the hybrids.
J-117
2:15 am | July 31, 2003
1. thx u for ur pointers, (see riot, we are tryint to be FRIENDLY) 2. I wrote that starcraft story a long time ago, so it has been deleted, sorry, and Blizzard will deny it, I was shocked to hear about it, a year ago when they called me and asked me permission for it, I had since delelted a couple of years ago, so I had forgotten about that I even had a story. 3. Idont belive in sueing because that causes more problems and makes people homeless :(. 4. I love Blizzard stuff anyways, so Y the fuck would I sue a great game company? 5. besides I get 20% of all royalties anyways :) (that means if the game sells a million $, I get 200 g's :) 6. I have tried anger manegement before it doesn't work because soemtimes I go insane like when riot started this shit, I have had therapy since I was 5, IT DOESN'T WORK, cuz its genetic for some odd-ball reason.
Wiley
12:48 am | July 31, 2003
Oh, and thanks. Nice to hear I didn't type all that for nothing :)

Oh, and have you ever thought of anger management? I know a very good counseler...
Wiley K
12:32 am | July 31, 2003
Riot: You can say his writing is crap, but instead of just telling him that it sucks, tell him what's wrong and how to fix it. It's called constructive critism.

J-117: E-mail your Starcraft story to me at Kimballwh@aol.com, please, I love Starcraft. Oh, and does it involve the Hybrids? Have you even gotten to that level? Can't wait to see what they actually are.

Oh, if they stole your idea, do what any American would do: *cue Peoples Court theme* SUE!!!
J-117
9:50 pm | July 30, 2003
and Im also chantin with alpha lance
J-117
9:43 pm | July 30, 2003
wiley k, u have a very good point, but I now my writing isn't the best, my very first story is clear proof of that, but still I have made great stories in the past, like the one that's becomin the basic storyline of the upcoming blizzard game Starcraft: Ghost (even though they wont admit it.) my speelchecker somehow doesn't work so im trying to fix that and I have to write so fast because to the chapters that Im in at 7th column, they love my stories, that they are constatly craving for more, And for the flamewar, I think Im just trying to be the voice of the people, cuz most people here dont really like a guy like riot, where all he says is "ur writing sucks shit" If he keeps saying that, athey why the fuck is he in the fan fiction section in the first place? and Im not goin to put u on my hit list, because Im gonna take ur sayings to heart and mind. and Riot started it so dont blame me, for him being a fucker.
Wiley
8:56 pm | July 30, 2003
Oh, and 5/10(average)
Alpha Lance
8:54 pm | July 30, 2003
Everyone chant with me.FUCK YOU RIOT,
FUCK YOU RIOT,FUCK YOU RIOT.
Wiley
8:53 pm | July 30, 2003
Man you people worry me sometimes...
Wiley K.
7:48 pm | July 30, 2003
*drives up in Scorpion*
"Stand down, soldier! Thats an order!"

Jesus frickin Christ, calm down! So what if he says your writing sucks, that's his opinion. If you haven't noticed, it is a free country. He want's to say it sucks, he can. If he want's to say it rocks, he can, AND NO AMOUNT OF YELLING, CURSING, THREATS, etc. WILL CHANGE HIS OPINION! If you don't agree, that's fine, but don't start a fuckin' flamewar over it. All flamewars do is waste space. Oh, and he did say don't take it personally, and that it wasn't just your story. While your writing isn't the best, it does have lots of room for improvement. So maybe if you stop wasting time with the fucking flaming, maybe you can learn to write better.

Read the fan fiction by the vets: Tramataised Marine, Steele, Wado, Dispraiser, Moniter101, El_Halo_Diablo, Greg Foutch, Infernal(who's real name I can't think of right now), Agent Shade, and anyone else I missed, and think about how to make your stories as good, if not better than theirs. Run the story thru a spell check, fix the grammer, PROOFREAD! If something isn't the best it can be, make it the best. That's why it's taking me so long to crank out the 3rd chapter for my story( which, for all my fans, is almost ready. :). Read the story from the audience's perspective, think: "Does that make sense? Would I enjoy this? Am I gay?..." [Just kiddin about that last one;)] If something is sucky, make it not...suckey. There, that's my advice. Yoou're probably going to disregard it and put me on your hit-list, but hey, that's fine. I'm just trying to help. But please, stop the flaming.
Steele
7:41 pm | July 30, 2003
Your story is good, 8/10. And Riot? Go suck turkey nuts!
J-117
5:13 pm | July 30, 2003
see, At least I got fans, sucka!
J-117
3:27 pm | July 30, 2003
at last, if u hate everybodys shit, then why the fuck are u here in the first place, this is a place for fun, not for reality, but to change the sotry of halo in ur own image, to see what Halo could've veen like if u made it, m'kay. so bug off!
Helljumper
3:27 pm | July 30, 2003
Hey, do you do writing Riot? if you do, i wud like to see it. If you dont, dont critisize the fan fiction. If you dont like what you see, dont read it, we dont force you to. Its just a little fun thing that people like to do. And saying that its stupid, is just stupid. So chill out, Relax, and make ur own storys.
Anonymous
3:27 pm | July 30, 2003
Nice case j
J-117
2:09 pm | July 30, 2003
I like constructive critisieum not "this story sucked shit, or ur writing sucks shits J-117" Riot, u have said that my writingg sucks which is a violation of that rule. I just wanted u to know that, and that nothing that u do can calm me down, only my loyal fans can, now go back to sony or nintendo, or where ever the fuck u belong...
J-117
2:06 pm | July 30, 2003
FUCK U RIOT, ONE OF MY OLD STORIES HAS BECAME THE BASIC STORYLINE FOR THE UPCOMING BLIZZARD GAME: STARCRAFT GHOST, M'KAY, NOW U BETTER GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE, JUST BECAUSE ALL MY OTHER SHIT DOESN'T GET PUBLISHED BUT STOLEN FROM ME DOESN'T MEAN U HAVE TO BE A COCKBITE, M'FUCKING KAY?!!!!? NOW LEAVE THIS PLACE U ANTI-HALO BITCH, Y DONT U GO BACK TO SONY WHERE U FUCKING BELONG?!!!?
riot
12:09 pm | July 30, 2003
hey j-117- chill out; your writing sucks. empty threats and cussing doesn't change that.
J-117
12:21 am | July 30, 2003
sorry alpha lance, I meant Riot, :(
thx for ur kindness, unlike that riot dude.
J-117
12:20 am | July 30, 2003
I have anger management problems, alpha lance, Im not a person to piss off! now be gone.
Anonymous
12:20 am | July 30, 2003
shit J, f***in chill!
Alpha Lance
9:57 pm | July 29, 2003
WHOA!!Chill J.
J-117
9:45 pm | July 29, 2003
this section is for enjoyment not for critisizing, u bitch, get the fuck out of the bungie sites or else..., bitch IM FRIENDS WITH SKETCFACTOR. DONT MAKE MY CONTACT. I SWEAAR TO FUCKING GOD. UR ASS IS SO MUCH MORE THEN GRASS, IM GONNA BEAT U SO BAD, THAT YOU'LL BE THE ONLY ONE IS HELL WITH A WHEEL CHAIR, YOU COCKBITING, FUCKTARD, I TAKE SHIT SERIOUSLY, THATS IT, UR GOIN DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Alpha Lance
9:41 pm | July 29, 2003
That was pretty sweet stuff there,keep it up.

P.S. riot your crazy if you haven't enjoyed
these fanfic.So don't make me show ruttless
aggresion,riot.
riot
8:13 pm | July 29, 2003
and i say this in reference to all the fan fictions, not just this one- so don't take it personally
riot
7:51 pm | July 29, 2003
i can't believe the crap that gets posted in this fan fiction section. i have yet to read a story here that was enjoyable. in almost every story ive read, the description and dialogue is dreadful, there are scores of grammatical errors, and the plots are cliche and uninspired (if they could even be called plots). to make things worse, fanboys post messages praising the authors. hbo should remove this section or at least screen the entrants better
J-117
11:58 am | July 29, 2003
thx, rambo, u have always be thoughtful...
Anonymous
11:58 am | July 29, 2003
tight story J-117, I cant wait for the next one.
Rambo HALO
11:38 am | July 29, 2003
very cool!lots of gore,cursing,and other stuff made it cool!
J-117
11:35 am | July 29, 2003
feedback would be nice...
scope
1:21 am | July 29, 2003
short but good


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