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Comments for 'A John Before Halo:Part 1 (Changed for the better)'



funnyguy23
2:29 am | September 12, 2003
very good stuff man. Way above the below average stuff I keep reading here. Nice.
Rambo HALO
10:06 pm | July 17, 2003
You did it again!Nice work,man!you deserve better from these guys!
J-117
2:11 am | July 17, 2003
could somebody give me feedback on my second story?
James
3:02 am | July 16, 2003
odd albeit a good one jus watch your 3rd person more closely
|3re+t
6:43 am | July 13, 2003
I'm not criticising man just wondering if it was official or not
Nightblade
10:55 pm | July 12, 2003
Cool
alpal
9:23 pm | July 12, 2003
ok
J-117
4:39 pm | July 12, 2003
look bungie only inspired me to do this, I made up the timeline myself.
|3re+t
3:25 pm | July 12, 2003
I mean is it like the real timeline Bungie says or just one that was made up for the story
Arinoth Koby
3:14 pm | July 12, 2003
Good story, just you switched from third person to first a bit
J-117
3:03 pm | July 12, 2003
made-up man its in the future remember?
Brett
8:13 am | July 12, 2003
What's this about

Is that timeline real of made-up?
|3re+t
8:13 am | July 12, 2003
What's this about

Is that timeline real of made-up?
|3re+t
8:13 am | July 12, 2003
What's this about

Is that timeline real of made-up?


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