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Comments for 'The Marine: The Battle To Survive Chapter 1, Leaving Halo'



Arch
12:09 am | August 7, 2002
Sarge, we didn't mean to chase him off. its just that we don't like Mechs. Its HALO! Nice story, Iceman. I like this.
ThReAdEdAcE3
11:02 am | August 5, 2002
you have a great start for a story here. My only dissapointment was that i thought it was a bit short. i cant complain though because the way this started out, i dont want to chanhe your writing style. it keeps you looking for the next installment.
The Iceman
4:21 am | August 5, 2002
Just using as a reference. I hated the game personally lol
Sarge
1:32 am | August 5, 2002
Soem advice never mention mechwarrior or mechs her. My friend did and he got flamed off the site.
The Iceman
1:17 am | August 5, 2002
Wow, I am shocked at all the positive reviews of this story. I hope to have the next installment up between 1-3 days so keep an eye out. I really don't know how to respond to you Spartan415... Hmm... lol j/k. The story (I hope) is interesting as it comes and will begin to make more sense as I write it. Oh, and as far as being short... You are right. It is my style to end it a little early to keep the suspense and anticipation up. Once again thank you for the positive reviews and I hope to get the next chapter ready ASAP. BTW, did everyone understand the concept of the halographic battle mode? If not, think Mechwarrior meets a Star Trek simulator. ;-)
Spartan415
6:18 pm | August 4, 2002
nice start, it looks like it has potential but please dont run off turning a good idea into a crapy one, not to put you down, sorry, just dont want to see that happen.
Tinny
5:36 pm | August 4, 2002
Looks great so far. Only slight confusion on the Covenant dropship but I like your style of writing. Very nice to read one not about the MC once in a while which has a involving start to it. Keep it up.
Knightmare Wolf
3:27 am | August 4, 2002
I like the approach on this one, keep it going


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