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Comments for 'Life Workin' for HBO, Part Two'



CoLd BlooDed
2:03 am | December 21, 2003
But for the story it was alrite...careless mistakes like what Jamirus pointed out and some grammar problems.... 7.9/10, also for length
CoLd BlooDed
6:31 am | December 20, 2003
I'm gonna send in my ASoWE story, lol finally huh?
Thomas Harper
2:26 pm | December 19, 2003
it was kinda boring. i think that there should be some more action and details but other than that it was good.
Bean
1:07 am | December 19, 2003
Hmmm it's like a HBO simulation
Hawk7886
2:55 pm | December 18, 2003
Oh, so that is what HBO HQ is like ;)

What do they feed the HSPers?

8/10 for length
Jamirus99
8:28 pm | December 17, 2003
"I had a burger dinner; he had a chicken dinner.....................................After lunch"

I rest my case.


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