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Comments for 'Life Workin for HBO,Part Three'



FOrunnER
6:04 pm | December 18, 2003
Good story. I think a good idea would be to have evil hackers with mod-weapons attack the building and the HBO-ers fight'em off. Good job, 9.8/10
Hawk7886
3:02 pm | December 18, 2003
Hey . . . I think I got mentioned in here, but the Hawk had a NINE as the last digit in his name :\\ Is it really that hard to remember? ;P

Anyway, I'm just glad I wasn't the n00b.

7/10
Walker
11:30 pm | December 17, 2003
Good, amusing, liked it. Found only two problems: a lack of me, annd your Aussie had a Cockney accent. Other than that, very good. And I will soon be sending you a new chapter of my ASOWE side-series.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Sterfrye36
10:05 pm | December 17, 2003
It's just for fun, Shade.
BTW, whatever ha[ppened to ASOWE 2? Did you give up on it? Oh, and that newbie fan fic writer had better NOT be me...jk. Let's see, at this point I have...15 fics in.
Agent Shade
9:56 pm | December 17, 2003
i don't see the point of this story....
SOS.Odin
9:44 pm | December 17, 2003
sry buddy
but imma hafta say ur crazy
u gotta be crazy to come up with this stuff
and dont listen to the people below me
they got 6x6 offices :P
Jamirus99
8:33 pm | December 17, 2003
"Then, my cell phone ringed." Gah.

'Nuff said man. Proofread and try to make it easier to read....
Neco Divad
6:24 pm | December 17, 2003
No offence, it was interesting, but I couldn't figure out what was going on. Just wanted to make sure you knew that.
Neco Divad
6:18 pm | December 17, 2003
Sorry HK, but what the #^@& was that about? Sounded like TRON, but with Halo. Can you explain what I just read?


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