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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events - Sequel, Part Three'



AnthoPeterTill/G. French
11:03 pm | January 8, 2004
you did quite a wonderful job writing this piece of imagination but like FOrunnER said, you forgot some of the writers, but I know it's hard to know em all. however, if theres still smthg like that again, id like to collaborate, plz.
Mainevent
12:47 pm | November 24, 2003
I spelled it right, capitalized wrong. Sorry FOrunnER
FOrunnER
4:23 am | November 24, 2003
RRRRGH, you still spelled it wrong. FOrunner? Its FOrunnER. Ah well, I wont get my panties up in a bunch.
Mainevent
1:27 am | November 24, 2003
Sorry FOrunner.
CoLd BlooDed
11:17 pm | November 23, 2003
Sweet, thanks FOrunner.
$$$
10:59 pm | November 23, 2003
$$$
FOrunnER
10:59 pm | November 23, 2003
Oh, and (sorry this has nothing to do with the story), be on the look out for a new series I might be creating. I am not going to give you anymore info than that. If you want more you can join the United Jackals of Halo at the 7th column.
FOrunnER
9:27 pm | November 23, 2003
Mainevent, I would be honored to be on your team, but one thing. Dont call me Forerunner!! My name is FOrunnER, it would be like if I called you...Maine Event. After a while it would get annoying.

And also, yes, a considerable amout of appeal to this story is that it has other fanfic writers in it, but I also think it is fairly well written. Oh, and dont worry CoLd BlooDed, Ill check out your story (notice Mainevent how I spell his name correctly)
hornet34
7:16 pm | November 23, 2003
Jamirus99, you have a point, the writing so far has been unspectacular, although I think its on par with everything else out there. And the idea has been used before, BUT, I was applauding the way its set up as to allow everyone to write their own squad adventures and submit them.

I think Walker's right, this story isn't necessarily about writing the best fanfic ever, but is just designed to be a fun way to be a part of the game. I mean seriously, who hasn't imagined themselves piloting a Banshee or lining up the orange flesh of a hunter with your trusty sniper rifle. Yeah, it might not be original, but its good harmless fun.
Walker
7:03 pm | November 23, 2003
I agree, it's no literary masterpiece, but the idea of getting sucked into the game was H_K's and the point of this story is more interactive fun than actual story.
Jamirus99
6:20 pm | November 23, 2003
Some of you guys crack me up....here you guys are, congratulating Hunter when all he's done is ripped off a bunch of GOOD fics, and made them unoriginal.

That was the joy of Gunnery Sergeant, Skav, Jillybean, and Wado- their stories were ORIGINAL, and FUNNY.

Also, you manage to spell WARBOW wrong throughout your entire "literary masterpiece"....please, just stop writing. It's too painful to go on.
Blue Angel
4:25 pm | November 23, 2003
very good piece of Literature, like the idea for this. very good.

i personally dont want to be in any squad considering that all i need it me and my brother chris. considering that every time we play halo for xbox we always win.

but ver good job. :)
SOS.Odin
3:02 pm | November 23, 2003
good job
cant wait for walker's piece
imma become an avid reader of ur series now
why...because its frickin pimp
Mainevent
5:30 am | November 23, 2003
Very well then. Carry on.
CoLd BlooDed
5:06 am | November 23, 2003
I'm no n00b, you won't have to worry about that....sir. Lol
Mainevent
4:39 am | November 23, 2003
It depends son, how good are ya? I'll take ya for now. But if you go gettin killed...
CoLd BlooDed
10:52 pm | November 22, 2003
Hey Mainevent, would you like to have a sniper/pistol man along in your squad?
Mainevent
7:39 pm | November 22, 2003
Alright, If hornet's taken, then I'll take anyone except a n00b.
Mainevent
7:25 pm | November 22, 2003
Check that, I believe that that is SESPiders site, I'm not sure though.
Mainevent
7:21 pm | November 22, 2003
Nope, that's Thesomeones, from xbox.com/forums. He had exclusive rights to the story when I was first posting it. But he said yesterday that his site was no more....
Hunter_Killer
12:29 pm | November 22, 2003
ONLY 4 HBOERS PER SQUAD CHOOSE CAREFULYY lol =)
Hunter_Killer
12:29 pm | November 22, 2003
Don't forget to write up to me and fast at jlp8118@sbcglobal.net! I can't finish the next part till I get you guy's submissions! HURRY!!!! =(
Walker
4:57 am | November 22, 2003
Hmm... I found Mainevent's Homeworlds series at http://www.ozline.net/halo4u/Main.htm. That your site, Mainevent?
Walker
4:34 am | November 22, 2003
Well, mostly my squad is non-HBO regular game Marines from the 9th, aka the Walking Dead. Just happens I have the hero of my first story, LCpl Dirk Kennedy in my squad... yes, I've already introduced Hornet34, complete with shotgun and piloting skills. Anyway, the work is in progress, and I'll submit it to H_K once I'm done for approval.

Semper Fi

-Walker
hornet34
4:21 am | November 22, 2003
hey mainevent, thats fine by me, but Walker already said something about being in his squad. Of course, he DID say something about a double sized squad We might be able to circumvent H_K's 4 to a team rule.
Sterfrye36
3:49 am | November 22, 2003
I sent in a part, Hunter. You see what you think.
Mainevent
3:04 am | November 22, 2003
I'd be glad to have Hornet34, Wado, Forerunner, and Goatrop in my squad.

Great story.
CoLd BlooDed
2:10 am | November 22, 2003
Are all the places taken up in squads already? lol
Hunter_Killer
1:23 am | November 22, 2003
Ok, but what about the story?
aasdasd
1:18 am | November 22, 2003
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CoLd BLooDed
11:33 pm | November 21, 2003
Hahaha, sorry for posting again but anyone who feels like it can you read my story? Its called Fight for New Tatley, sorry for advertising on someone elses story thing but only 2 ppl have posted. Thanks.
monitor101
10:27 pm | November 21, 2003
Yet another great installment in this highly popular series keep it up man! Hey I've finally joined the two page club (if there is one). I finally got a second page on my full fiction listing. This may not be a big accomplishment in some of your eyes but I am happy that I have been writing for this long.
pj-NYkr90
10:23 pm | November 21, 2003
PS: Hornet, I'll read your stories. Us 'vets' need to show the kids a thing or two.
pj-NYkr90
10:21 pm | November 21, 2003
thanks FOrunnER for recocnizing that some of the other HBO-ers were missed. But good job on the story H-K. Just, add more killing...a lot more killing.
hornet34
7:29 pm | November 21, 2003
I was hoping it would be you, Walker. I'm all for realism in my stories, but I honestly can't see anything stopping the two of us.
Walker
7:25 pm | November 21, 2003
Be proud to have you, Hornet34. My 16-man squad (leftovers from two combined into one) could use a good short-range man. I'll have you wander into our midst, maybe? Glad to have you back.

Semper Fi

-Walker
hornet34
4:05 pm | November 21, 2003
(Since no one will check the old posts, once again)

I'm back. Had a break for a couple months, came back, and what do I see but a couple of veterans and way to many noobs. I was thinking of starting another fanfic, (I've actually already started), and I was wondering if any of my old audience was still around to enjoy it.

To Hunter_Killer; great idea for the story. I'd have liked a little bit more elaboration on some of the early battles, but the way your allowing everyone to write in with their own chapters should alleviate that problem. (Hey, one of you guys could include me in your squad, I'm downright nasty with a shotgun.) Like always, keep up the good work, its good to see a familiar face (uh, name) still around.
CoLd BlooDed
4:00 pm | November 21, 2003
Very cool story, Hunter. Do you think you could make them a bit longer so we have more to read, tho? Anyways keep it up.
Alexander_Valient
2:21 pm | November 21, 2003
Alex_Valient: AAAGH!!!! don`t launch the escape pod! Wait for us Noobs!
*Escape pod launches*
Alex_Valient: God dammit, not again.
Thunder: And you said you knew which way it was!
FOrunnER
2:10 pm | November 21, 2003
Damn you Hunter. I was planning on doing a series where all the HBO'ers were sucked into Halo. Nice job though. I just want you to know there were just one or two HBO writers you missed.....cough*me*cough
Walker
1:54 pm | November 21, 2003
Yes! Good joob, man; not only was the writing great, it went along with what I've already written and it sets the stage for what I was going to have happen next. Hope to see more, and you can expect to see some of my own piece of ASOWE soon!

Semper Fi

-Walker


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