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Comments for 'The Inter-Galaxic Wars'



Hunter_Killer
11:26 am | October 11, 2003
Actualy, Communisum was based on all supplying the needs of each other, all equal under God. But, they let the greedy rich dudes in charge, and Stalin came in to magnify the problem. So, Communisum was good. The way the Rich Pigs did it: BAD. Here's my defense of the Commies.

Now, don't you feel bad about the flames? No? YOU WILL MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA lol j/k wicha.

-Hunter_Killer

"We want peace! A peice of this, and a piece of that!" -George W. Bush
Walker
11:26 am | October 7, 2003
Communism is an affront to God.
Hunter_Killer
11:33 am | October 6, 2003
Lol calm down, men.
Walker
11:53 am | October 5, 2003
I HATE COMMIES.
Alpha Lance
6:18 am | October 5, 2003
WTF are you talking about D. Commie
Dirty Commie
3:52 am | October 5, 2003
""with text and stuff scrolling along. ""

If you want my opinion (and you do!), NEVER use 'stuff' like that! It makes you look lazy and your story unprofessional.
monitor101
9:23 pm | October 3, 2003
Dude this is a sweet story. An awesome idea about the future of the Human/Covenant world how they become allies cool. What you didn't make a ASOWE finale that sucks ass do it. 10/10
Alpha Lance
9:29 pm | October 2, 2003
Wait...that wasn't much space.
Alpha Lance
9:21 pm | October 2, 2003
Hey! Good story H_K. Hope to see more stories from you.

Also, HBO today is starting to get to many newbies, which is good. But the only thing wrong about them is that their stories doesn't catch the readers attention. Plus, they are not really telling on what the story is all about, they need to put in some kind of acknowlegment, kida like what authors do how the back of their books. So I'm just reading their stories cold.

But my story was like that at the beginning, but everyone knows what it is about now. Also it gets everyones attention, well...maybe not everyone.

P.S. Sory to take up so much space on this comment column.
pooman
8:08 pm | October 2, 2003
cool 10/10
Walker
11:51 am | October 2, 2003
Just sent you an email, H_K. Hope the Finale is as great as the others!
Darth Lord
11:20 am | October 2, 2003
What is your email and aim sn
Hunter_Killer
10:15 am | October 2, 2003
Drop me a line at jlp8118@sbcglobal.net if you want the fan fic, or you can go to the Fan Fiction section, find one of me stories, and click on me name.
Walker
2:11 am | October 2, 2003
inform us if you post on fanfiction.net
FOrunnER
12:57 am | October 2, 2003
This is a good concept, but I do have a few suggestions. Elaborate more on the two new alien races, we dont know anything about them. Second, try to have a little more diversity. I don't think you've mentioned any Covenant soilders so far. just my thoughts. GET TO WORK ON THE SERIES OF WIERD EVENTS!!! peace out
Walker
12:50 am | October 2, 2003
I won't stop, MasterGrunt. If I start a project I see it through, no matter what. I'm just saying that my Grunt Brigade series is getting very boring. I'm writing a new one at the same time, but be assured Part 3 will be out soon... and yet there is still no battle! Part 3, where my last series ended (except for the Epilogue) and I haven't even really started. For me, a great accomplishment. For you, hopefully not too boring.

Semper Fi

-Walker
MasterGrunt
12:12 am | October 2, 2003
Again a good story except for the those heavy weapons rifles. Those are definetely too far fetched. Oh, and if the enemy uses projectiles and the cofederation has all this new technology then how come the new aliens seem to be easily defeating the confed's? Otherwise pretty good. Oh and walker DON'T YOU DARE STOP YOUR GRUNT BRIGADE SERIES. ARE YOU TRYING TO TORTURE ME TO DEATH OR WHAT? LoL.
Hunter_Killer
9:20 pm | October 1, 2003
I don't got AIM. I got YIM, and I don't got no screenname for that. It's my E-Mail adress. I ain't old 'nuff to got an screenname.
Walker
9:00 pm | October 1, 2003
Oh, is it because of the LOTR thing? Yes, that was bordering on plagurism, but I wouldn't cross the line into banning it. It was just mimicing. You weren't claiming the words for your own. Oh well, it's not my choice, unfortunately, so we'll just have to live with it. I still say post it on fanfiction.net. Or do you have an AIM screen name?
Walker
8:47 pm | October 1, 2003
You plagurized (spell)? Or people were plagurizing? Either way, I'm pissed. I wanted ASOWE fanale. Try posting it at fanfiction.net (or whatever that website is).
Dark-beam
6:41 pm | October 1, 2003
Great story, looks promising.

Peace with covies, yay!

Then again, wouldn't it take pretty long to develop all this tech in only like 20 years, and then make it standard equipment? We're looking at some 70 years to get all this up and running.

Unibucks, thats a good one...
Hunter_Killer
5:09 pm | October 1, 2003
Plagurisum(Spell?).
Leave me you E-Mail, and I'll mail it to anyone who want it. =)
Walker
11:27 am | October 1, 2003
Hell yah! BUT WHY?
Hunter_Killer
11:18 am | October 1, 2003
Louis Wu won't post it here. Whoever thinks that sucks totaly, gimme a 'Hell yah!!!!'
Walker
2:31 am | October 1, 2003
Ah, the triumphant return of the Fighting Pattons. This story was pretty good, and I especially liked how you listed the weapons gradually, instead of all at the beginning. And the ending was cool. 9.8/10, and how come you can post these but not the finale for ASOWE?

Semper Fi

-Walker


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