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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events, Part Nine' |
Hunter_Killer
12:32 am | September 29, 2003
THE FINALE, PART TEN, IS COMMING VERY SOON!!! Hold on to you under-things!!!!!!!!!!! =)
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pooman
9:16 pm | September 28, 2003
sorry hunter i need 2 now..... im grounded folks soo that chapter will not be in for a while
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pooman
9:05 pm | September 28, 2003
To Hunter Killer: can i make a comment about my story (The Alliance) on this comment page?
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pooman
9:05 pm | September 28, 2003
good
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Sergeant B
6:11 pm | September 28, 2003
Can I be in your stories if the rest all die?
*Hehehehe.................!*
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Agent Shade
3:36 am | September 27, 2003
read what i said Alpha, i'm not greedy, i don't wish to be in this story...if i did, i would've put something in my comments about adding me. also, you call me immature? why would you call me that? i don't think i've said anything that's made me immature. I'm merely expressing what i think about this story. that's not being immature Alpha, that's being insightful and also trying to help. you are going to say that i'm not helping, but if you read one of my comments earlier, i said that the whole point of my comments is trying to help them.
geez, some people never learn...
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Alpha Lance
8:35 pm | September 26, 2003
Agent Shade is so immature and greedy.
To the no name guy-We like this series not because we are in it, but because it is good.
But there is nothing more that I hate when people put down and say it sucks when they work so hard on it.
And we all should thank Hunter_Killer for being so kind to do something like this for all of us.
Thank you very much Killer.
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Hunter_Killer
8:29 pm | September 26, 2003
What army? =(
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Wiley
12:39 pm | September 26, 2003
To Elfster: The person leading the army at dawn is Wado. I just know it.
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Walker
11:40 am | September 26, 2003
Shade, I beleive you entirely, and I'm glad you heard what I had to say. I heard your words also. I'm not going to ask for reconciliation, because it's not necessary. Just to know that you know how I feel is enough.
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Alpha Lance
11:26 am | September 26, 2003
Don't hate Shade.
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Hunter_Killer
11:24 am | September 26, 2003
Good choise not turning this to flaming. I apologise to Agent Shade, but Alpha Lance did tell me to press this sieries on.
Some people *Gasps* like it. Imagine that! =)
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Mainevent
10:26 am | September 26, 2003
I don't think you realised it H_K but I was joking. And I meant wiley, not walker. I saw a W in the name and assumed it was walkers.
It's a good story.
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hornet34
1:39 am | September 26, 2003
Alright, I don't want to get involved in all the petty bickering going on, I'm not really supposed to be here (I said I was leaving, but I did want to see the rest of this series). Hunter_Killer, I think everyone of these is hilarious.
Yea, we all know the Covenant wouldn't attack with ladders and do all the other stupid things described. But you all have to realize, THIS IS A COMEDY. It is supposed to be stupid, not concerned with grammar or realism, but just on making others laugh. Case in point, Gasmask's "Interview" series. Unrealistic, but still hilarious. Same goes for Wado's "Shadow of the Archons Part 34, Behind the Scenes..."
So if you all realize this fact and understand that there are a lot of other writers who are struggling and could use more forum discussion, HBO would be a better place.
Hunter_Killer, keep it up. I'll still visit the site while this story keeps up, otherwise you probably won't hear from me for a couple months.
"Be kind; Everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle." John Watson
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Walker
1:37 am | September 26, 2003
It has plot. Halo, with a twist on it. There's your plot.
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Anonymous
1:33 am | September 26, 2003
The only reason people like this series is because forum members are in it. It is poorly written gramaticly and has almost no plot.
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Walker
1:19 am | September 26, 2003
Salaam.
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Agent Shade
1:12 am | September 26, 2003
peace (lol monitor)
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FOrunnER
12:54 am | September 26, 2003
I'm not sure if it was exactly like the lord of the rings for comedic value, but I didn't like it whole lot. I mean, it kinda creates a cool picture in your head, but its very unoriginal. I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, but try to have some originality.
Once again a please ask you to include me. Not a major role, just mention me in a battlescene or something.
Peace Out.
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Agent Shade
10:51 pm | September 25, 2003
read carefully the other comments page of this story Walker, and you will see that i did tell him how to improve it, yet he denies it, so in order to prevent another war from starting, i will stop reading this series, since i do not like it at all.
my comments weren't meant to hurt HK or you Walker. I apologize if they did, but the idea behind them was to let the author know that i wasn't impressed. I am well aware that HK is capable of producing unique stories, but this one just doesn't cut the butter or whatever acronym you wish to say.
i do not appreciate your comments about me Walker. the point of the comments section is to allow readers to express their opinions about the author's story, yet you tell me to shut my fucking face? the whole idea behind my comments was to help HK. knowing a person like you, you won't believe me, so be it, but at least you know that that was my idea...
that is all i have to say, i shall not read this story again...
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Agent Shade
10:51 pm | September 25, 2003
PS: i never wanted to be in this story, so don't call me greedy
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Elfster
10:44 pm | September 25, 2003
*sitting back in a corner with a bored-as-hell look on, clapping slowly* bravo, bravo.
and doesn't it suck having to share the planet with idiots....
Just kidding )
HK, I think im one of the most included person in the story, and the ladder thing made me laugh, especially since my names Elfster and Legolas is an elf, but know this: I wouldnt bitch all day if I only got one line or want included at all. If you did it three fan fics in a row i might stab you in the face with a sodering iron, though =)
lol im eager to see who's going to be leading the army that comes at dawn.
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Walker
10:24 pm | September 25, 2003
Hell, so what if this one was poorly formatted and a boring ripoff? Big phucking deal. The originality of this series, it's downright fun quality are what make H_K's writing so very enjoyable and addictive. Never seen you come up with something so addictive and original, Shade. At least not to me. And I've been really pissed off lately at all the negative comments with no offer on how to make the person's writing better. If you hate someone's writing, at least tell them why. If they keep posting what you think is crappy literature, tell them how to fix it so it won't be so crappy next time. If you can't take the time to do this, then you don't really have the time or right to make continual complaints. You understand what I'm saying? I hope so. At least Shade took the time to write down what he thought, but he should write some more constructive criticism that will allow H_K to improve. The TTT ripoff is a done deal. Can't change it now. So shut your phucking trap already. If anyone has been offended by what I'm saying, I might be sorry and I might not be. Depends. All I know is that I don't want this to turn into a damn flame war, because, as wise Wado has cautioned us *me*, they only cause trouble and get people banned. If what I said is sufficient to get me banned, just know that I said it once and once only, and that I have said what I felt I must say, for the sake of my own conscience and sense of duty to my friends. If I get banned, which I hope I won't, but if I do, I leave you a martyr. Sic eunt fata hominum.
Semper Fidelis, and God be with Thee.
-Walker
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Walker
10:15 pm | September 25, 2003
Posty.
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Hunter_Killer
8:56 pm | September 25, 2003
Dejavu city.
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Alpha Lance
8:56 pm | September 25, 2003
Shit! Now we posted in a one min time period.
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Alpha Lance
8:54 pm | September 25, 2003
Damn! Me and Killer posted in a two min time period.
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Hunter_Killer
8:54 pm | September 25, 2003
Thanks also to Alpha Lance. =)
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Alpha Lance
8:53 pm | September 25, 2003
Like I told you H_K, they are all greedy, but, in other words. Great story, can't wait for the other you. Soooo, keep up the great work.
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Hunter_Killer
8:53 pm | September 25, 2003
To those who give me crap ratings cause i didn't mention them:
Go to hell! If you be SO greedy and unfair on this subject, I'll never include you.
Thanks to Sergeant B and Walker, always faithful. =)
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Hunter_Killer
8:51 pm | September 25, 2003
And I use Spell Checker, so that assault on my Speeling *lol* is a total lie.
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Hunter_Killer
8:47 pm | September 25, 2003
I say to Wiley and others that weren't included: Greedy greedy greedy.... I can't include EVERYONE.
To Shade: Whatever.
STOP BEING SO GREEDY, or you wil all die in my sieries in very bad ways to go out!!!!
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Agent Shade
8:33 pm | September 25, 2003
i personally agree with wiley's 1/10. this story is poorly written, structure wise. spelling mistakes, and not very interesting, since i've seen Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers, this was really boring. you even copied the whole ladder idea. really, if the Covenant were attacking a "castle" of somesort, they would use dropships, not ladders. you need to go into more detail and really really improve your writing style. new paragraph when someone new speaks, it seemed as if every sentence was a new paragraph...i'm not the kind of guy to just say "GOOD JOB, 1235662/10" cuzz it's clear this story needs work
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Walker
8:17 pm | September 25, 2003
H_K doesn't deserve a 1/10. I'd say a 9/10.
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Mainevent
7:08 pm | September 25, 2003
A 1/10 for the same reason as Walker pointed out.
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Wiley
12:57 pm | September 25, 2003
Still neglected, poor me.
[wine] But I wanted to do the Legolas Thing!!!!!![/wine]
you should get a 9/10
but you get a 1/10 for not putting me in.
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Walker
11:20 am | September 25, 2003
The action was good, but this one seemed a bit more boring than the others, and we've come to expect a high standard from this series. It could have used a bit more description, also. You know how I feel about Helm's Deep already, but you could have varied from the battle at least a little bit. I wouldn't have minded seeing someone (Hawk, preferrably) jumping from the wall (or in his case, falling) and taking out a platoon of Covies with grenades as he fell onto them. Just a thought. Anyway, this is one of my favorite series (If not the favorite) on HBO, and I await the climax anxiously. Death, here I come...
Semper Fi
-Walker
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Mainevent
10:41 am | September 25, 2003
I saw my name, but there was no killled, shot, or butted, anywhere near it.
good job though
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Sergeant B
10:28 am | September 25, 2003
Good JOB!
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