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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events - Sequel, Part Fourteen' |
.SOS..Odin
11:24 am | May 19, 2004
obviously not fans
of asowe here
i liked it
especially cuz im in it lol
it was well written
as well as asowe can
be written anyways
pimpin job
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Sterfrye36
6:25 pm | May 15, 2004
The meatloaf thing is just there to be goofy, as is Spark screaming "DESTROOOOOY!" or something like it. The storyline of this whole series is that Spark essentially controls HaloPC, and he sucked in all of the HBOers. That's why he can make the Flood do his bidding.
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Keyes
10:30 pm | May 14, 2004
Not bad, but
"SENTINELS! DESTROY! DESTROY! AND DESTROY EVEN MORE!"
That's not 343GS
"The blue ball of -----'s fear was confirmed when he heard the klaxon. "Sentinels! Destroy the other humans! Flood Warriors! Dispose of their diversionary force."
The Flood and the Sentinals/343 are on diffrent sides. Thats why they alway's kikll each other.
"ODIN!" I yelled across the room to the other side, "MEATLOAF EM! ON THREE! THREE!!!!!" Me and Odin both chucked our last clump of the glowing, green, deadly explosive.
What glowing green explosives. Plasma Gernades are Blue, and charged Plasma shots aren't explosives. Other than that, it was pretty good.
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Hawk7886
7:44 pm | May 14, 2004
"Area clear, H_K!" Odin said. I nodded. "Let's git goin towards the Bridge." Me marched forward.
What the fuck?
"A dozen sentinels floated up into the view screen, and began to shoot at us. Most of us dived behind the display or a wall, but I couldn't in time. A beam hit my shoulder, causing blood to flow freely from it."
So, after you got nailed in the shoulder by a beam of superheated light, you just sat down calmly? Oh, wait, later you note that you "managed to drown out the woozy feeling..."
"...managed to get three Fully Loaded ARs, two Pistols, two Shotguns, my Plasma Swords, a Sniper Rifle and 10 Frags. I also got 24 Clips of ammo for each weapon, all in my inventory."
Uh-huh, sure... Whatever you say... After all, it's your story...
"In response, I squatted and yelled in my Fake-Grunt-Voice, "RUN AWAY!" I then did a life-like imitation of a Grunt's little waddle/walk, going in a circle."
Realistic way to kill the life-or-death situation, there...
"I dived out of the way..."
You "dived." Hehe.
Even though I don't like rating stories, I'll do it anyway.
2/10
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CoLd BlooDed
6:50 am | May 13, 2004
Good. Nice and long. One thing, though...
Where'd I go?
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