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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events, Part Seven[H_K]'



Walker
3:54 am | February 1, 2004
I am off on my own just West of Alpha Base right now... not much going on. That's all I'm gonna say.
CoLd BlooDed
3:29 am | February 1, 2004
Thats what Sterfrye said, it was a trick by 343.

Hey Main, have you checked out my latest Forced Betrayals? You know, the one that I took from you... :P
Mainevent
10:41 pm | January 31, 2004
Well, two Mainevents could be a computer glitch. :)
CoLd BlooDed
6:33 pm | January 31, 2004
Why do you want that?
Inept Zombie
1:54 pm | January 30, 2004
Can you mention me dying a horrible death?
monitor101
1:48 am | January 30, 2004
Short but good!
teemus
6:53 pm | January 29, 2004
Also, isnt this story and Colds supposed to combine? Because in Colds he left off as soon as they entered the Gravity lift, and you didnt mention a single part about that. I also saw the same problem that Sterfrye36 saw. Also, what happend to November squad and the rest of us, I dont think you mentioned us once. Other then that it was good, moves a little to fast though.
Sterfrye36
1:30 pm | January 29, 2004
H_K, Walker, CoLd BlooDed, we've got a problem. If H_K evaced November squad in part four or whatever, how did they end up in an ice canyon? And that menas there are now two Mainevent's in the story.
I"ve got an idea about how to fix this so stop writing till you get an e-mail from me, okay?
BiOI-IazArd
12:02 pm | January 29, 2004
Nice sory and idea you have running with this seris. But one thing, ur a little full of your self, your not the best you know.
BiOI-IazArd
3:26 am | January 29, 2004
Didnt mean to offend any one, just sayin my opinion on the story, isnt this what this is for?
CoLd BlooDed
2:10 am | January 29, 2004
Listen, Bio-Hazard, I really don't see him full of himself, I don't know what you mean by that, anyways.

Oh yeah, SOS.Odin you should check out my ASoWE or FB if you feel like it. I haven't seen you on in a while!
SOS.Odin
1:41 am | January 29, 2004
its his story jack hole he can be the most supreme being in the multi-verse if he wanted to
anyways good job ya do move a tad bit fast
good job
CoLd BlooDed
12:02 pm | January 28, 2004
Good story, H_K.

Just one thing, could you make it so that your team and November squad get seperated (somehow, the choice is yours) so I can write a seperate part until we meet up somewhere.

Oh yeah, and shouldn't it be "Part Eight"? :P
CoLd BlooDed
11:30 pm | January 27, 2004
Hey Walker, you should check out my new series, "Forced Betrayal".
Hunter_KIller
8:30 pm | January 27, 2004
Lol. =)
Snake Solid 117
7:12 pm | January 27, 2004
My post below. Sorry.
Anonymous
6:42 pm | January 27, 2004
Personally i think that your story moves to fast. You don't put in enough detail for my tastes. It is innteresting, but what was with the line about the story line, an dcrewing it up? Anywho, your story is interesting, so please continue.
Walker
1:36 pm | January 27, 2004
Why did a hacker have to give him a shotgun? They would have already had some. Anyway, continue this series, and make sure somebody dies.

Semper Fi

-Walker


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