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Comments for 'Story Of UNSC Constituter Ch1'



Horror
7:03 pm | May 24, 2004
Yea, just gotta empty a few more clips on their arrogant son of a bit.. nooo don't drag me away from they computer noooo must submit!
Flying Battle Man
1:42 am | May 24, 2004
Wiley,
The 50mm isn't that big. The warthog gun is 50mm. Of course, if you sent me out there with a fully loaded UNSC Destroyer. Hell, I'd be back in two days with out any ammo.
Cause of weapon depletion: Covenant Recon, Boredum
lol
Flying Battle Man
1:39 am | May 24, 2004
very nice story. Even if they wanted to, cna you imagine how much time it would take to get a firing solution on a fighter?
"Locked--no wait almost, oops he jinked, crap he slid sideways."
Of course, having the white streak of a MAC round coming in at you would cause just about any Elite to need new armor.
Horror
12:09 am | May 24, 2004
I would so like to submit my speed run of The Maw, that is always the level I beat easiest on legendary, but I don't have VHS camcorder, or video capture device sigh. =(
Horror
12:09 am | May 24, 2004
I would so like to submit my speed run of The Maw, that is always the level I beat easiest on legendary, but I don't have VHS camcorder, or video capture device sigh. =(
Wiley
12:09 am | May 24, 2004
Theyre 50mm. if they used .50 theyd be shooting q-tips at it
Horror
12:07 am | May 24, 2004
lazy cooks?
MC's Cousin
7:35 pm | May 23, 2004
Yeah, they wouldn't use a MAC to take out a fighter. Just a wasted round. They would use point-defence 50 cal guns. Oh, speaking of "Mac Cannons". Mac is MAC, it's an abbriviation. It stands for Magnetic Acceleration Cannon, so putting the word "cannon" after it is just plain silly.
And just a tip with numbers, spell "7 hundred hours" out. Actually, spell out any number under ten.
And you also need to check on your military facts. I do not think that the mess would be "closed due to hours". Not at all.

But, keep trying.

Signing Off


MCC
Spartan81388
7:26 pm | May 23, 2004
Yes but what about the point defense guns mentioned in FoR? Why not use those? Anyway it was a good story.
Horror
4:30 pm | May 23, 2004
*them being us losing a fighter =(*
Horror
4:26 pm | May 23, 2004
Well you have two choices, let the Longswords take em out, and as we know the Covenenat are superior in technologies what with their shields, which would probably cost them a fighter, or be as ruthless as the Covenant to save lives.

Other than that how did you like the story?
Spartan81388
3:41 pm | May 23, 2004
I just have one question. Why would they use a MAC cannon to destroy a fighter? Seems like overkill to me.


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