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Comments for 'Halo: The Advocate'



Kyle
10:48 pm | October 6, 2002
Oh, yeah. Sorry, Nub Nub!And yes. It did take me about 2 days to finish.
Hoju
9:11 pm | October 6, 2002
Kyle, what DOESN'T a Retarded Ewok have in common with Halo?? I'd like you to find one thing!! Look at the grunts. They're....ewok....like..... And was it really that long? Damn.... I'll shorten the next one up
Kyle
8:56 pm | October 6, 2002
I finally finished the story! I enjoyed the ending where it shows Keyes-- Well, I won't give it away to those who haven't finished it, yet.
Anonymous
3:48 pm | October 6, 2002
Disney sucks, dude...
Kyle
5:56 pm | October 5, 2002
What's a retarded ewok gotta do with any of this?
Flood Impalor
11:35 am | October 4, 2002
LOVE it. nice detail. Keep it up!!!
Hoju
12:03 am | October 4, 2002
I sent in the first part to my next Fanfic a few days ago... haven't gotten a response from anything yet, on the page, in my inbox... oh well, maybe I'm just impatient. Liberation is the name, and I have no clue how long this one's gonna be.... it's a sequel to this though, I'm not sure if some of the things are going to make AS MUCH sense to those that havn't read this yet
el_halo_diablo
1:39 am | October 2, 2002
i mean disney touch
el_halo_diablo
1:37 am | October 2, 2002
I love the ending dude, it had a nice disnay kind of touch to it. ;D
Kyle
9:14 pm | September 30, 2002
Ha. I couldn't read the whole thing. I got tired. But here'a a hint of advice. Put each of the chapters into their own page like my stories. If you give all of the chapters their own page, then people won't have to get tired.
Anonymous
9:12 pm | September 30, 2002
That's a loooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnggggggggg story. I didn't finish it.
Hoju
11:49 am | September 29, 2002
It can take 2-3 months, cuz I hardly have any free time and I have tendonitis, so it hurts like hell to type for long periods of time. But I like doin it anyway :D
Hoju
10:30 pm | September 28, 2002
and for my tghird comment having nothing to do with the fanfic of mine that I should be talking about...I realised that a lot of you were probably going to haloonline.net for that halo 2 info, which I'm sorry to say was taken down. If anyone goes there, I'm Nub Nub, in case you hadn't noticed. Just felt like telling someone, cuz my full name was too long for this sites purposes (Nub Nub the Retarded Ewok)
Hoju
10:01 pm | September 28, 2002
wait, I got an idea now... but it's a little far-fetched.... But I gotta find out some info somehow. We know the prophets and elites started the Covenant, but does anyone know how the grunts jackals and hunters joined/were conscripted? Any help would be greatly appreciated...
Hoju
10:01 pm | September 28, 2002
I know you're jokin diablo, but you have NO idea how painful it is. I perform and practise more then a professional double bass player does (4-5 hours a day minimum), which is the cause and painbringing of my tendonitis (which is beginning to die down :D). AND I'M ONLY 16 YEARS OLD!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!! (I just had to share my pain with everyone, teehee. And I'm not so sure I'm gonna write another one. I can't get any good ideas :|)
el_halo_diablo
8:44 pm | September 28, 2002
Lots of my cross country runner teammates have tendonitis on their legs and stuff but they STILL run 14 miles a day! dont be a wimp hoju (j/k about the whole wimp part) ;) .
Arch
11:26 am | September 28, 2002
el_halo_diablo, don't tell me you're thinking of quitting... i'll bash your skull in! i refuse to lose another regular of the Fanfiction page here!
Arch
11:06 am | September 27, 2002
i must say, Hoju, i was blown away. this was amazing. just plain out amazing... *looks up* oh, what?? lol i just finished after what, two hours? lol i haven't been reading all that fast, so Hoju, after reading this with a migrane, please, just submit it in separate parts, on completely separate days... thank you. for all our sakes.
MasterChief21
5:13 am | September 27, 2002
Wow
el_halo_diablo
12:48 am | September 27, 2002
I don't see how a story could take 2 to 3 months, I would give up by that time (hey besides I might never be here after 2 or three more months!)
Unknown Soldier (killa_snypa7)
12:59 am | September 26, 2002
ive been away for a while, and i just returned and i must say that was an excellent read...probably one of the best fics ive read on these boards, although there are many great writers like vector40, Gunship, Stewart, and lots other, just probably cant 'member your name...BTW, my next fic is due out in two - three weeks...
Hoju
12:09 am | September 26, 2002
Yeah, I'm debating whether or not to write anohter one based around the Teff guy.... but I'm pretty lazy. I got the basic outlines of a plot, but nothing really big has come into focus yet. If I can figure out how to connect the ideas in my head, expect another one within 2 or 3 months :)
el_halo_diablo
9:14 pm | September 25, 2002
read from part 1 to part 6 that is
el_halo_diablo
9:12 pm | September 25, 2002
lol it took me thirty to forty minutes just to read to i think it was part 6 ;D
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6:34 pm | September 25, 2002
this story was cool but it was very, very big took me like 30 - 40 minuets tp read
Gman
6:02 pm | September 25, 2002
i don't care what anyone says i loved it, keep up the good work
Hoju
11:29 am | September 25, 2002
Thanks man. I got a little carried away as you can see :) I was hoping to get 10-15 pages min, hahaha. Guess I overshot it a little bit
el_halo_diablo
2:15 am | September 25, 2002
yah i guess so. I read most of the first link, and its very good! I hope to see more (but less in words) from you! :)
el_halo_diablo
9:18 pm | September 24, 2002
the author ANd anyone who lived to read this whole thing deserves a round of appluse! ;D


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