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Comments for 'Indoctrination'



Bruce
9:18 pm | November 11, 2002
Will Louis ban me for this?
Bruce
9:18 pm | November 11, 2002
Hehe sorry I just wanted to entertain myself lol
el_halo_diablo
9:17 pm | November 11, 2002
hello*
Bruce
9:17 pm | November 11, 2002
Well I guess i have to entertain everyone now.
Bruce
9:15 pm | November 11, 2002
DIABLO... GONE???
havok
12:35 pm | October 30, 2002
i know what you are thinkin: hey, this guy copied most of this straight from Fall Of Reach. well i thought that the book didnt go into enough detail about training and indoctrination. so i decided to pick up from when Mendez left to train the next wave of SPARTANS. Vyke and his group of 85 kids are the next wave of super soldiers. i will try to add as much to their training as i can. lots of live fire exercises and stuff.
Wado
4:57 am | October 30, 2002
Good story. The interaction was the best part, but you picked a tough subject to write about. What I mean is that you may find that there is a fine line between making a super-soldier and creating a misunderstood monster. There may be good reasons not to describe such training in detail, some things people aren't ready for... oh well I digress.

Good luck and keep writing.

Sarge
1:48 am | October 30, 2002
smoshmonker(el_halo_diablo): heygreatbballplaya1: supsmoshmonker(el_halo_diablo): : do you still go on HBO?smoshmonker(el_halo_diablo): : like look at fan fics?greatbballplaya1: sometimessmoshmonker(el_halo_diablo): : can you do me a favor?greatbballplaya1: uh huhsmoshmonker(el_halo_diablo): : ok my internet explorer isn't working, so I can only be on AIM, so I was wondering if you can go on a few recent fan fics, and go on their post thingys and say that I wont be able to write any fan fics for a while?

Their you go DIablo says he can't post no more and wanted me to tell you.



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