6:56 pm | August 13, 2003
Although MYSELF, I think you shouldnt try to make your fanfic about that, because it might...be in your way for your own Ideas. that is why i do this all different... like 35 years after. just play some futural games like Freelancer for PC or maybe Yager, and you might work that out great, you have a fantastic story.
Nonetheless, it is good worked out and I do think you deserve a 8.6/10... that is a good rating, so keep it up.
Creator of Halo: The MCconto Chronicles
(Part 6 and 7 released: you can find it via the search items...)