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Comments for 'Battle for Tectron: Chapter 4'

your gay
4:48 am | January 3, 2004
well what can is say you are all gay
9:36 am | December 30, 2003
Can someone at HBO just get the lobof reading all the posts to fanfics, and decide which posts are 'clean' and which posts that shouldn't be here? God I hate impersonators and people that tries to horrass you.
12:31 pm | December 27, 2003
yea that can't be him
Agent Shade
7:00 am | December 27, 2003
I'm a girl you fuckwit
CoLd BlooDed
6:47 pm | December 25, 2003
That CAN'T be Agent Shade.
Agent Shade
2:19 pm | December 25, 2003
you suck you need to learn more you fuckwit
5:10 am | December 25, 2003
I thought that it was an awesome story and i really can't wait for the next chapter. The character development was excelent and Marcus hiding the fact that he is a private really adds some good tension and excitment to the story. Keep it up!
11:42 pm | December 24, 2003
It was nice. Keep at it, your description of whats going on, how marcus is feeling for lieng and stuff. Keep at it.
4:30 pm | December 24, 2003
I wrote my first fic halfway through TFOR and I'd never even finished Assault on the Control Room... but, w/e. I agree with what Mainevent said.
4:25 pm | December 24, 2003
Nice story I liked it. Some few errors but its ok, nice work. Marcus is in deep shit I can tell you that. I can't wait for the next one, keep it up.
CoLd BlooDed
12:58 pm | December 24, 2003
I thought it was good, but a little short. Keep it up! 8.1/10

Read my last chapter of Fight for New Tatley and tell me what you think of it.
6:35 am | December 24, 2003
thanx fellas, i'm feeling the love.
3:20 am | December 24, 2003
You comment on my story I comment on yours. Im impressed, its very good for someone who has only read one halo book and hasn't finished the game. I like the whole thing with Marcus impersonating the Lietunant, and now he's in so deep he cant admit it. It add's tension to the point when/if he's caught. I like it alot.

I give it a: B
2:26 am | December 24, 2003
Yea, it was semi-short. Medium. No real length problem.

I like the way you make his hiding the fact he's not a real Lieutenant a secret.

Perhaps someone else finds this out and blackmail's him?

I don't know, I liked it. Just check over spelling. A word or two like moment (should have been movement) that you could have found.
11:14 pm | December 23, 2003
I guess no one liked it, its ok ya'll can't hold me down