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Comments for 'Seargent Vick: Part 1'

11:54 am | April 10, 2004
Well coLd, in today's Marine Corps there are about 40 Marines in a infantry platoon, thats 4 ten person squads, with a platoon Leader a Lieutenant, and a platoon sergeant. I don't know how things work in the future. cause u have to factor in that a Pelican holds 10 Marines. I figure the uNSC would probably use between 30-20 Marines in a platoon. These are all guesses.

4:33 am | April 10, 2004
Yea special forces squads usually work in fire teams like in my story with 5 people in a fire team. there is a sergeant commanding or a corporal and u have a heavy weapons person, a marksman, a medic, and a rifle man. something like that. it depends on the mission and wats need. There could be a fire team of just heavy weapons if needed.

3:23 am | April 10, 2004
I liked it, a bit short but it fit. I got a question, is a special forces squad smaller then a regular squad? My next chapter should be out in the next update. Keep it up!
CoLd BlooDed
7:28 pm | April 9, 2004
. . . although it comes out great at the end. :)

Okay, Helljumper, thanks, my next story should be coming out soon and I'd like to know how many Marines are in a platoon. That's it for now, thanks.
1:44 pm | April 9, 2004
yea wraith, u should make sure your chapter is good, cause you'll gets lots of negative feedback other wise. and some comments can get pretty nasty depending on how bad the fanfic is. I'm in college and i like writing this stuff eventhough i'm lazy and take a long time to do it.

12:41 pm | April 9, 2004
...Now I don't want to submit my next chapter when I'm done with it. It's nothing compared to this.
5:49 am | April 9, 2004
Umm i don't know a website in specific, but if u have any questions u can ask me. I did 4 years or junior reserve officer training corps, which is an army course i took in high school. I ended as my battalion commander at the rank of Lieutenant colonel. so yea i know military stuff.


we don't use luck in the corps, we use bullets~ Lt Sanders
CoLd BlooDed
1:46 am | April 9, 2004
Hey Helljumper, do you know where to get army information? Like how many soldiers are in a platoon, weapon statistics, formations, etc.

If you could point me out to a website that'd be great.
8:51 pm | April 8, 2004
Very nice, Helljumper. A good amount of tension, that's good. 9.5/10

Hey, if anyone is curious, if you want to read my rap lyrics (yes, I write and rap lyrics), then contact me at VladimirLem31 on AIM (if you have it).
4:41 pm | April 8, 2004
Make Billy a flood!
1:55 pm | April 7, 2004
Since ya'll want it, i'll see about finnishing htis series and continueing the other, i think i'm just gonna combine my first two series and see what happens.

First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
Nick Kang
11:56 am | April 7, 2004
lol. Great story. Yeah I was just getting into your latest series, and was wondering when it was gonna start again.

6:57 pm | April 6, 2004
I don't know it must be the crack
Ross Becalick
5:09 pm | April 6, 2004
...what's wrong with me today?
Ross Becalick
5:08 pm | April 6, 2004
Ooh, a got a little excited with the 'e' key there.
Ross Becalick
5:04 pm | April 6, 2004
When I saw the title 'Sergeant Vick' I rolled my eyese. I shouldn't have, this was very good.

'We don't use luck in the Corps, we use bullets.'

Authentic bit of tough-guy grit there, I like!
11:38 am | April 6, 2004
Hmmmmm... i liked the story but... it's too hard to explain what it is missing... I give it a 8.9.10 for now.
6:09 am | April 6, 2004
Thank ya'll, i'm taking a break from my other series, this one is going to be short like three chapters. It should be good, come on where are the rest of the comments.

CoLd BlooDed
1:12 am | April 6, 2004
Good, but what happened to your two other series that you had going? I still liked it, but the punctuation was a little off today.

Overall, great work, lovin' the ODST's, keep it up.
8:58 pm | April 5, 2004
This is very nice, this chapter seemed a little slow action wise, but this is just the first part. Very nice, keep up the good work.
7:57 pm | April 5, 2004
Just one comment, where's the love people where's the love. I mean mad Jackel has like hundreds what about Helljumper.


no, us Special Forces guys are not whiners just me.
The Silver Spartan
5:38 pm | April 5, 2004
Hey, I really liked this story, they fact that the ship seemed to be abandoned adds a lot of mystery to it. I am going to guess that Billy is now infected with the flood virus and is a combat form? I guess I'll find out next chapter!