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Comments for 'Battle for Tectron: Chapter 8'



anoymouse
7:00 am | March 6, 2004
it was a really good series,but the ending needs more work. you kinda seem to cut off right before what would seem like a good battle in the story. other than that i really enjoyed it.
Jon M
3:58 am | March 3, 2004
Okay read the whole series. What an effort. You did a good job. So now you're giving this a rest to work on the new one: ODST Lead the Way?

Keep writing. =D
Helljumper
11:10 pm | January 26, 2004
True Sergeant B, i understand everything you just said.

First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all

Feet first into hell
Sergeant B
9:51 pm | January 26, 2004
O 美麗,對琥珀,對寬闊的天空顆粒的招手!在結果實的平原上,對紫色的山最高權威!美國!美國!上帝在我上下跌他的优雅!以及王冠你的好跟手足情誼一起!從海到充滿陽光的海!
teemus
4:18 am | January 24, 2004
Why are some people so immature?
Jonathan Taylor Thomas
3:53 am | January 24, 2004
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haha!
SOS.Odin
10:00 pm | January 23, 2004
sry bout that
comp gayed
SOS.Odin
9:49 pm | January 23, 2004
first off i'll hafta tell ya that
shades are actually the covenant
stationary turrets
secondly, ur story's not bad Helljumper
i havent written in quite some time
readin this kinda makes me wanna
go back and write again
good job
SOS.Odin
9:49 pm | January 23, 2004
first off i'll hafta tell ya that
shades are actually the covenant
stationary turrets
secondly, ur story's not bad Helljumper
i havent written in quite some time
readin this kinda makes me wanna
go back and write again
good job
SOS.Odin
9:49 pm | January 23, 2004
first off i'll hafta tell ya that
shades are actually the covenant
stationary turrets
secondly, ur story's not bad Helljumper
i havent written in quite some time
readin this kinda makes me wanna
go back and write again
good job
Helljumper
3:29 pm | January 23, 2004
Person you wrote that same paragraph in my last chapter. Next chapter i promise action. Leave a comment on my series, dealing with character development, plot, progression of the story etc.

Orbital drop shock troops

First to rise, Last to fall
Helljumpers do it all

Feet first into Hell
Person
3:36 am | January 23, 2004
Oh teemus, you missed two weapons: the MA7B Battle Rifle, and the SMG. (these are in Halo 2) There is also a purpol covie sniper rifle coming out. More vehicles are Shadows, a Covenant reconisance vehicle with 4 seats including a gunner. The Phantom is a huge ship that flys high in the sky. It fires red lasers and can be used as a dropship. The last ones are the Creeps. These are covenant transport buses. They are big and have a turret that fires green lasers. :D

HELLJUMPERS ARE THE BEST!
teemus
3:18 am | January 23, 2004
That was good. I was wondering, did the Captain find out about how julio and them knew? Keep up the good work.
Helljumper
7:23 pm | January 22, 2004
Leave me your comments on the Battle for Tectron series as a whole. Thanx
first to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all


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