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Comments for 'Foersaken Forefathers Part X'



Havok
2:36 am | August 5, 2003
yeah i forgot that your all XBOX freaks lol. the game is for PC. i like console better than PC, but this game makes it very worth it.
AlphaBravo343
5:11 pm | July 29, 2003
Hmm, this was all I expected and more out of Havok. His unique and awesome style nevercease to amaze me. Oh, and my ethernet card screwed the pooch so dont expect much out of me for the next few weeks at the most. 10/10
Steele
7:42 pm | July 28, 2003
For what system? Computer, arcade, Xbox???
Havok
2:24 pm | July 28, 2003
no im not in college yet, thank god. im going into my senior year, and theres a shitload of essays and applications to do.
Havok
2:24 pm | July 28, 2003
Freespace: The Great War- the greatest first person space fighter game ever developed, save for Freespace 2, of course. you should go check it out.
Steele
5:00 pm | July 27, 2003
You're in College, Havok? I'm just a sophmore in Highschool (go Sea Hawks!). What's Freespace?
Havok
1:26 pm | July 25, 2003
Ishy, your stuff aint half bad either, ya know. i like your stuff a lot.(pats Ishkabibl on the head, and then resumes his place on the throne of the Fanfic Etherworld.)
Ishkabibbl
2:27 am | July 25, 2003
I read this...and...(goes off into cornor and weeps uncontrolably.)
Havok
1:30 pm | July 24, 2003
hell yeah i playe the original Freespace! that was such a kick ass game, i had to get the sequal as soon as it came out. if you havent played it or heard of it, go get it right now! its the best space fighter game i have ever played. ever.
Kaboose29 (a.k.a. Spookybanana29)
12:12 pm | July 24, 2003
Hey guys...i submitted a Fan Fiction on...Tuesday..but it hasn't shown up on the Web-Site...how long does it take for a Fan Fiction to appear on HBO?

By the way, my story is called 'The War of Warriors', and its my first Fan Fiction..so if it's sucks, tell me in the Comments section..and help would be appreciated to make my series better...:)

Anyhoos, this was a great story...10/10!
Wiley
10:46 am | July 24, 2003
Did you play the original Freespace? I love that game, espically the Shivans.

oh, and 9/10
Havok
2:27 am | July 24, 2003
yeah, im sorry bout that Steele. im trying to squeeze in time for fanfics in between college shit, and i got games and books messed up. theres this game Freespace 2, and the giant monter ship, the Colossus, is three kilometers long, which is about a hundred times bigger than the largest conventional capital ship. sorry for the complications, folks, but besides that, how di you like my superweapon i dreamed up for the Covenant? comments anyone?
Jinkaiden
10:33 pm | July 23, 2003
Well...I've noticed changes in the style. No name for this chapter? No dialog either (Which is not a problem in my book.) But yes, I would like to point out Steele's objection. However, this is a good addition to the series. 9.5/10.

Jeez, everybody else is sending in their stories so fast now...I've barely started my new series. ARGH!

Jinkaiden
Steele
6:23 pm | July 23, 2003
Not too shabby, 9/10. You said the ships were large, measuring a kilometer from bow to stern. Well that really ain't large; maybe Destroyer size. The PoA was over a kilometer in length, and it was the smallest ship to ever recieve the 'Cruiser' designation. Just a thought...


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