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Comments for 'Foresaken Forefathers Part VII- Knowledge Gained is Knowledge Earned'



Havok
9:16 pm | July 8, 2003
well mr Hack, i had absolutely no idea what to write about for thsis one. alphabravo was gone on vacation, and my mind was stuck in neutral.
Steele
4:42 pm | July 5, 2003
9.5/10. 'nuff said.
Neo//hack
3:18 pm | July 5, 2003
Very interesting. I like this series so far. 9.5/10.

I give you both credit for:

A. Dividing the series in such a way.
B. Coming up with a brilliant plot together.
C. Making it work while keeping me (and oters, I'm sure) hanging at the end of each one.

I was surprised at how short it was, basically because I wanted to read more of the series in one sitting. However, I don't write it, so it doesn't depend on me. Keep it coming (and fast, please!!)

Neo//hack
'Nosolee
8:33 pm | July 4, 2003
Really cool, I like this series: 9/10. There are some spelling mistakes and and you frequently change the capitolization of Forerunner to forerunner. But my stories aint perfect either.
Havok
7:15 pm | July 4, 2003
Wow this was sopposed to part VIII. i cant type, and i apologize. yeah, AlphaBravo writes the odd ones, and yours truly writes the even ones. we work the plot out together, so its a real combined effort.
Spookybanana29
3:27 pm | July 4, 2003
This was a great chapter..i'm looking forward to reading more...one question, which one of you two actually write these stores?

9.8/10
POOMAN
3:25 pm | July 4, 2003
I LIKED IT


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