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Comments for 'Contract Killers (Part II)'



MasterGrunt
9:21 pm | October 12, 2003
This reminds me of one of those mafia movies, no offense. Your story is okay.
Havok
11:20 am | October 10, 2003
you'll see....
Mainevent
11:04 am | October 10, 2003
And then they killed the guy and lived happily ever after....right.....right?
Hawk7886
11:13 am | October 9, 2003
I was waiting for the connection to Halo.

I love this storyline; something new and fresh.

I hope to see 'great things' from this series.

10/10
Agent Shade
5:49 pm | October 8, 2003
well done, but don't you think you could make it longer? i just felt it was kind of short, but nevertheless a very thrilling story, keep going mate 10/10


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