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Comments for 'ONI Black Ops Part Eleven(Finale)'



Spook
3:18 pm | June 9, 2003
From writer to another, This is a work of Art. The
series was great. We needed some new things and we got them. Anyway, i was going to incorperate the Dr. Device into my new story i am writing but it wont be original so i might just use somthing different. Project Oracle is on its way and it will be similar to this in the means that it involves a lot of scientific research and production. Anyway. 9.7/10. Like it was said by Steele it was great but not perfect.
Havok
6:07 pm | June 8, 2003
AlphaBravo, wherever you are. i am off to Hawaii for 10 days. im leaving in like an hour. sorry i couldnt be on to talk about the next foresaken forefathers chapter. while im gone, whistle up some ideas and maybe get some writing started if your not too busy on the mod. i will be on aim as soon as i get back
scope
1:05 pm | June 7, 2003
No mom dont take him away from us! We NEED his writing!We need HIM!Hail Havok!(sort of)
Agent Shade
11:29 am | June 7, 2003
a brilliant way to end the series mi amigo, you are a very talented write, please keep sending them stories in and find ways to get on the comp, excelente, another 10/10 for you
Knight
3:30 am | June 7, 2003
dude man u rock so keep on writing some other stories and post them ......peace
Havok
1:23 am | June 7, 2003
and we have a winner! yep Ishhabibble, it was like the Dr. Device. i had to come up with a cool weapon, wondered if anyone would notice.
Ishkabibbl
10:48 pm | June 6, 2003
Is it just me, or did that weapon that blew up the planet seem like Dr.Device from Ender's Game?
Steele
10:33 pm | June 6, 2003
My mom is the same way: "Damn you, boy! How often you got to use that computer! You write more than a russian race horse!"

Personally, I've never seen a russian race horse write, but oh well!

Pretty good series, Havok. I would have shortened some of the pieces down, but oh well. 9.5/10 overall series. I haven't given out a 10/10 yet...(a 10/10 must be perfect in every regard), but this series was original and pretty interesting, espically for fan fiction.

Do as good a job on 'Contract Killers'
Havok
8:20 pm | June 6, 2003
my next series might tak a while. my mom is trying to keep me off the computer all summer, so i will have to sneak around and do it when shes not home. but i will get it done, i promise you that.
Wiley Kimball
6:39 pm | June 6, 2003
You, Havok, have the honer of reciving my first 10/10. I loved this series, too bad it has to end *sob* Nice way to close it, though.
scope
6:34 pm | June 6, 2003
WOHOO! Havok is still writing! Cant wait 4 the next one!
HiddenAssassin
4:42 pm | June 6, 2003
Great! Can't wait for the'Contract Killers', if it's as good.
Havok
2:22 pm | June 6, 2003
well dont you worry scope. im writing my next one right now. its called Contract Killers, so nobody take my story name this time! and im glad you all enjoyed this series.
scope
10:08 am | June 6, 2003
10/10 Well its here...this series has entertained us for a long time and now it ends(sniff)Thanks for bringing it to us and may be we will have another series like it. The files end here....


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