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Comments for 'ONI Black Ops Part Eight'



Xzilen
12:32 am | May 31, 2003
Wow, I like this. I'm going to go back sometime this coming week and read all of this series from start to finish.
Steele
12:05 pm | May 30, 2003
Good job, 9/10. I have NEVER read a story (any story whatsoever) that I couldn't criticize in some way, no matter how small. But this was pretty good.

Thanks for taking my 'grammar suggestions' to heart.
monitor101
4:28 am | May 30, 2003
No shit Havok this was awasome!
Migz
11:09 am | May 29, 2003
10/10. U rock.
Havok
1:15 am | May 29, 2003
have i really gotten to the point where no one can criticize my work? oh well, i guess ill just go make fun of someone elses writing. just kidding.
Splinter
9:43 pm | May 27, 2003
Excellent 9/10
scope
5:54 pm | May 26, 2003
9/10 That was so totaly awsome
Wiley Kimball
1:37 pm | May 26, 2003
Great. 9.5/10


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