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Comments for 'ONI Black Ops Part Six'



Steele
10:08 pm | May 20, 2003
Don't send me anything...
AlphaBravo343
6:36 pm | May 20, 2003
I have four viruses in my email service.....yeah
el_halo_diablo
2:17 pm | May 20, 2003
mabye if you developed some kinda secret code... ;). Why don't you guys just relay email messages? That's what I did with Havok for a while, it works fine that way.
Havok
11:51 am | May 19, 2003
or maybe my computer should stop being gay and start working like it should be.
Havok
11:47 am | May 19, 2003
AlphaBravo, my damn stupid friggin aol keeps freezing up. ive tried to talk to you the past three days. ill keep trying! you know what, you should get msn instant messenger
Steele
11:35 am | May 19, 2003
Yeah, I'll go check it out. But you typed that on like three comment thingys.

I'll get back to my The Defense of Earth Series soon enough. I've still got to finish Taking Halo. Plus I write Crimson Skies, Battletech, and Star Wars fan fiction.
AlphaBravo343
12:12 am | May 19, 2003
MSN won't work for me. Just keep trying to contact me. This is kind of important, and it can't be discussed here without revealing plot lines.
AlphaBravo343
10:50 pm | May 18, 2003
Hey Havok, I really need to speak with you regarding the next part of our series. If you could sign on to aim sometime soon, that would be great. Cool story btw, 9.5/10.
Havok
9:41 pm | May 18, 2003
yeah wiley is right. i like to write. but feedback is always nice. good to see you all like the story!
monitor101
7:51 pm | May 18, 2003
Same here diablo I'm taken a quick month break from writing so you can expect the next part of the Virus some time next month.
monitor101
7:51 pm | May 18, 2003
Great story 10/10!
Wiley Kimball
6:41 pm | May 18, 2003
Hey Steele, When are you returnig to the Defense of Earth series? I really miss it:(
Wiley Kimball
6:32 pm | May 18, 2003
His first 4 chapters have almost no feedback. if he put the effort in to write it and no one reviews the story to tell what they do or do not like, he may think no one is reading it. Feedback also helps you become a better writer.
el_halo_diablo
5:40 pm | May 18, 2003
Hey Havok, nice to see you're still on, and nice to see you made another good series. I forgot to announce my taking a break from fan fiction, so don't count on reading Part 3 of my interactive fanf ic anytime soon. Me and my friend's site, www.smosh.com got a whole buttload of new movies uploaded, so if you're bored, and want a good laugh, go check them out :). Anyway, I hope to read more from you later Havok :D.
Steele
5:31 pm | May 18, 2003
Like the others, excellent. 9/10!

*WHY REVIEW ACE'S STORY SO BAD, WILEY?*
Wiley Kimball
4:48 pm | May 18, 2003
I love this series, keep them coming. 9.5/10

*REVIEW ACE'S STORY*


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