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Comments for 'Chapter One Unforgiving Wounds' |
ToFu
7:05 pm | March 4, 2004
...no problem Hitman, just helping a friend a ignorant friend...but yeah, next-time, dont past the rocket launcher, when those 2 banshees r chasing u. Just get it and start blasting them!! r u can grab a Warthog and blast them out of the sky!
cya online bud!
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Hit_MAN
6:56 pm | March 4, 2004
Oh yea! I got u online ToFu HAHAHAHAHAHHA, u want a review here it goes, good story, a few errors but good, heres one: u said some trian circle animal, u mean sum train circus animal? i bet thats it
Just hlping a new pal! Since u did took out those guys who were on that DAMN BANSHEE chasing me! your a pal!
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CoLd BlooDed
6:26 pm | March 4, 2004
But then again...:P
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CoLd BlooDed
12:04 pm | March 4, 2004
That was pretty ignorant too, he was just askin' a question.
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ToFu
5:39 pm | March 3, 2004
YEA! and i remeber u too!! and i was the one who stuck ur head up that Elephants ass!!! Don't post ignorant comments please...
HIIIIYYYAA!!!
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Hit_MAN
5:14 pm | March 3, 2004
Hey ToFu, do u have HALO PC? If u do, your name is ToFu right? cuz i seen u playing HALO yesterday... My name was asswipe, i was the one who shot u n the head, remember?
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ToFu
5:12 pm | March 3, 2004
Alright glad u guys enjoy my story, cant wait 2 show u fellas Chapter Two: Death Without Regret
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SOS.Odin
3:09 am | March 3, 2004
good job
just read up the code
and capitalize Marines
not everyone seems to be doin that
i like the idea
keep writin
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Mainevent
1:05 am | March 3, 2004
I liked it.
Good storyline and believable characters.
I wouldn't have made them childhood buddies though. Anyway, there were a couple mistakes, but nothing important enough to worry about. Anywhoo, keep writing for sure.
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Wiley
11:23 pm | March 2, 2004
Not bad, a good story idea here...just watch the grammar. Remember: Spell check is your friend.
7/10
flesh wound
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ToFu
11:08 pm | March 2, 2004
What the Hell! Just TWO! oh well I am new...thx 4 the comments!
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The Soon Gr8 Writer
11:05 pm | March 2, 2004
So this is a new planet, these marines r n? Wow interesting. Good story, i like very much. looking forward 2 Chapter 2!
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ToFu
5:37 pm | March 2, 2004
My friend u will soon find out...:)
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Alucard
5:35 pm | March 2, 2004
Dude cool story, so what kind of thing tore up Corporal Steiner?
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