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Comments for 'Halo 1.5--From Halo to REACH--chapter one' |
fortune
5:32 pm | March 1, 2004
It was ok. Your story was a little gay but my friend is a fruit so i understand
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CoLd BlooDed
7:27 am | February 28, 2004
Everybodies gotta love Halo! :D
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
2:21 pm | February 27, 2004
Well, I suppose it was pretty good. If I don't Mind the innaccuracies. But yeah I guess if your a Fan of Halo, go for it. But I would recommend reading the books, just for the love of Halo. I won't yell at you for ignorance.
-MAP
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Mainevent
3:58 am | February 27, 2004
A fan is a fan. Casual or not, he may be a fan. If he wants to write, let him write. Just take the inaccuracies in stride, go where he goes, and enjoy.
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CoLd BlooDed
1:54 am | February 27, 2004
But if its FAN fiction then there shouldn't be inaccuries...
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Halo_2204
11:35 pm | February 26, 2004
Im sorry if my story is inaccurate and I do plan to the read the books. Then I hope I can write better fiction. But, this is FAN fiction and this is just a story I thought I'd right for fun. Sorry if you were offended by its inaccuracies.
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Mainevent
9:20 pm | February 26, 2004
I had three problems:
1) Spelling. It won't take long, and will fix the basic problems. What is it? Spellchecker! Dictionary.com for those who are too lazy/don't have a spell checker.
2) Plot: Other than this having been already laid out quite obstensively, its shallow so far. Work on that some. I'm not a big stickler to the story in Fan Fiction, hell that's why it's Fan Fiction right? So you can have fun. So have fun.
3) Length: This one wasn't too long, or too short. I liked the length. Easy enough to read in one sitting without getting too bored. That's not the problem. The problem is that you said you were having 8 hours, with 8 chapters per hour. 8x8=64. That's a LOT of chapters. Try to pan that down some, or pull what would have been two or three chapters together. Nobody wants to have to sift through 64 installments on the search function to find the one chapter they wanted to read/reread.
Thats all for me.
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MC's Cousin
12:17 pm | February 26, 2004
Dude, but...what were you thinking. Not to be mean or anything but, you know Bungie already covered that one, and MC wasn't jumping for REACH he was jumping for Earth. READ HALO: FIRST STRIKE, NOW! If you would have already, I wouldn't be getting angry at you now. I couldn't read past the first paragraph your story it such a big copy. Not good.
Signing Off
MCC
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BlackGhost
10:34 pm | February 25, 2004
It would be good, if it wasn't inaccurate. You need to read First Strike.
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