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Comments for 'Prevalence: Pt.1: Winston's Story' |
MC's Cousin
1:57 pm | May 28, 2004
Ahhh...
Well the format and writing style was a little off. It went by really fast, but...
I'm agreing with all the other comments about what's wrong with the story.
I don't like it but I don't dislike it...hows that?
Signing Off
MCC
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white grunt
4:55 pm | May 27, 2004
its cool i love it,but is he infected?
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Darkest90
11:13 am | May 27, 2004
I don't know about the frozen skin part, but otherwise, pretty good. I would have liked it to be longer, and be more in depth, but yeah, it was entertaining.
Good job,
Darkest90
P.S. Remember to check your Spelling and Grammar, I saw that it was lacking a bit in your story.
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CoLd BlooDed
10:21 pm | May 26, 2004
It was good, yes. Not extremely well written or formatted properly, but I still liked it.
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russ687
7:46 pm | May 26, 2004
crazy....
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Nick Kang
6:52 pm | May 26, 2004
I think that if your skin froze that solid, so would your insides. Other than that, the story was pretty good.
NK
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Halcyon-713
6:14 pm | May 26, 2004
Well, he didn't get infected untill AFTER the attack on the "General" (Think Keyes).
Other than that, he was the only survivor of a crashed UNSC ship on an icey planet.
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Halcyon-713
6:14 pm | May 26, 2004
Well, he didn't get infected untill AFTER the attack on the "General" (Think Keyes). Infact, he actually ATE (Not possible?) the Infection Forms. He had been on the planet, which was bassicaly an ice ball with an oxygen atmosphere, so long that his skin hardened so much that the infection forms couldn't penetrate it.
Wierd stuff, eh?
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Hikaru-119
12:18 pm | May 26, 2004
Nice....log of a typical psycho
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Frost Bite
12:16 pm | May 26, 2004
wow... nice. but you may want to get those voices in your head chcked out man :)
but seriously, nice job showing what an infected marine must think.
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