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Comments for 'Long Time Gone Part 7'



grylsy
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hmm ok people if any ever reads this... what the f$%^? is wrong with my stories that no one wants to read them? if it is lack of covenant i said when i started the series that they appear LATER with in the next 3-4 chapters and then they stay i'm ju7st giving the background to the story... or if it is that they just suck let me know as well and tell me what you didnt like i probably can tailor my next series to your tastes...

WELL BYE!!

---grylsy known as 'umr | fallschirmjager.sst' in the Coutner-Strike community----
SaGe ScOrPiOn
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
The stories are fine dude. Kinda confusing, and a weirdass plot. You have no timeline for when this is happening. Is it before or after the covenant took Reach, or what? Yeah, it's not bad, but you do have some grammar errors, and such. So i read it. It wasn't bad.

6.5/10
grylsy
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
well if you've read the first one is says it is the year 2550 so before fall of Reach and the HALO 'incident'
grylsy
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
yes i noticed the errors i made it sposed to be the 20th not 30th century :|


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