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Comments for 'Outbreak: Escape from Hell' |
343 Salty Beans
3:59 pm | June 23, 2004
And Halo...enough said.
343SB
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CoLd BlooDed
2:11 am | June 23, 2004
HBO isn't wasting time, I'm not a nerd, but I continue to spend my time here due to the fact that I love writing.
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343 Salty Beans
6:12 pm | June 22, 2004
Yeah. We nerds usually have a lot of that asset. Time can be wasted in many ways, and I pick this one.
343SB
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LostRock
5:33 pm | June 22, 2004
SB says it all. It was really uneven.
and SB, you have waaay too much time on your hands to write these comments. :-P
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343 Salty Beans
5:40 am | June 22, 2004
Refer to my previous comments on this series (I'm ALMOST positive I gave tips on this one).
Use the code! Also, there was a GIANT paragraph in the middle that should have been split up. Or was it already? You really can't tell if someone doesn't use the code, so USE IT! I'm gonna post it for your benefit, so you BETTER USE IT:
When you indent, italicize, and bolden your text in your word-editing program, it doesn't carry over to your FF/ That's why you proofread and check for mistakes. Instead, do this:
to italicize a block of text, put [i] before the block, and [/i] to end it. To bolden, do [b], [/b], and underlining is [u], [/u].
Indenting helps seperate paragraphs. To put an indent, put a [indent] where you want it to show up.
Finally, for a horizontal rule, put [hr] between two paragraphs. A horizontal rule usually shows a change in time, place, or other major switch in the story.
It's decent, plotwise, but the storyline is still a little confusing. I think I may have skipped a chapter. Oops :P.
343SB
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