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Comments for 'Revolution: Part 10: An Unwanted Surprise'



Bean
10:57 pm | July 7, 2003
diablo your not mexican because ur spanish is wrong.
Anonymous
3:57 pm | October 6, 2002
No hard feelings, eh?
gruntkiller
5:02 pm | September 30, 2002
only americans say thet sort of stuff abut canadians. sorry for any hard feeling i caused anybody
el_halo_diablo
10:35 pm | September 29, 2002
who ever said I was american? I could be mexiacan: Tu Es Muy gordo Y feo Y tonto. Soy muy robosto Y guapo! :D
gruntkiller
8:15 pm | September 29, 2002
ya actually i have but you ever caught your self being an idiotic american, sorry for any bad feelings
el_halo_diablo
6:12 pm | September 28, 2002
Have you ever caught yourself saying the word "eh?" in your sentences? Im sorry, but thats just one key word that I heard in Canada when I went there.
gruntkiller
5:02 pm | September 27, 2002
thank and guys some of the grammer is different from what your used to because i spell everything in canadian, we have some minor differences in our spelling and grammer
MasterChief21
3:38 am | September 27, 2002
Its not that bad, but you really need to watch youre grammar, subject verb agreement, and you have to stop swithcing tenses. Other than these minor things, its pretty good.
el_halo_diablo
12:47 am | September 27, 2002
yah I just hope it gets bad and stays bad! I dont like stories that are easy for the good guys!
Wado
8:49 pm | September 26, 2002
Seemed too easy for the good guys. Otherwise it wasn't bad.


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